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Lady Of The Lake
09-15-2007, 08:12 PM
This is my first adventure comic i was going to make a new region comic but that was to hard for me so here is my first ever adventure comic enjoy
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/204/dpcomicoj3.png

Hope you liked my intro comic

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UP to 6 must have al leat 3 fo the pokemon one
Xtra

Shadow Eevee
09-15-2007, 10:22 PM
1: The panels are uneven.
2: Sarah says I want to look in are room. It's our room.
3: Hyperlink!
4: Use apostrophes and I, not i.
5: Spell it Extra, not Xtra. We don't want people to get confused with the user.

Wingull
09-16-2007, 03:15 AM
That was very Nice. Im not a critic like some people.
You did a very good Job. Hope you make more.

Lady Of The Lake
09-16-2007, 09:20 PM
i probly wont nobody is joining

RET412
09-16-2007, 10:17 PM
ill join.

Name:Jade
Sprites:http://i184.photobucket.com/albums/x47/Flygon770/pokemontrainerApril.jpg
Additude:Always happy and kind
Gender:Girl
Pokemon:Eevee,Growlithe,Butterfree,Kirlia,Luxio,Pi kachu
extra:Can i be a friend who stays in the whole comic?

Galactic Spriter
09-16-2007, 10:20 PM
Good, but has some grammer errors.

Galactic Grunt