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Lady Of The Lake
09-17-2007, 10:29 PM
this is my second mystery dungeon comic the first one i didnt like so i wanted to make a new one here it

http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/5871/mysterycomicgx2.png

if you would like to sign up here is the form

Name
Gender
Sprites
personality
extra
[stuff you like things you want you to do in the comic ect.]




ready to start the next comic when i get some people

Lady Of The Lake
09-17-2007, 10:45 PM
why is it small

Dreemira
09-18-2007, 09:33 AM
Hm...just wondering, did you use the mawile sprites and portraits that I posted in the Pokemon Daycare comic thread? But they look similar. And most people just use the d/p sprites.

Ninaiso
09-18-2007, 04:44 PM
Name: Nina is Gardavoirs name
Gender: Female
Sprites: http://usera.imagecave.com/Ninaiso/NinatheGardavoir.PNG
personality: Kind and adventurous. Always ready for fun. Her smart aleck attitude often gets her in trouble.
extra: Can Team Squirt Be sent on a mission to save her in a deep dark and horrible cave? Then when she wakes up in there team base she sees that they rescued her and she falls in love with Munchlax. And she explains that her trainer abandoned her and she is all alone and sad. She is very, very, and I mean VERY strong.

-Pichu Boy-
09-18-2007, 05:41 PM
This comic is a real improvement on your old one, watergirl. Nice job :D

I can only spot one mistake. When Munchlax first speaks he says 'we get to start are rescue team', when the correct spelling would be ' we get to start our rescue team'. Other than that, it's all alright.

I think it looks good small, as it takes up less space :)

Anyway, on with my form...

Name Pikoo
Gender Male
Sprites http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k89/magickid930/Pikoo.png I arrnged them into sections for you ;)
personality Pikoo is really outgoing and always rushes ahead, which can lead him into tricky situations. He likes to meet new people and make friends. If he joined a rescue team, he wouldn't usually go out into the field, just monitor the teams progress.
extra Could Pikoo join Team Squirt, but, as said above, be sort of the techno-wizard and only go out on rescues if it's vital he does.

Lady Of The Lake
09-18-2007, 09:46 PM
nina and pikooo will be in the next issue and yes i did use the mawile sprites form the daycare i asked the person who posted them

Lady Of The Lake
09-18-2007, 10:55 PM
http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/7830/legendarywar2un8.png


if you cant read it heres link

http://i9.tinypic.com/5y2cmkl.jpg

Shadow Eevee
09-18-2007, 10:58 PM
Good job.


Even though for your punctuation you could have used punctuation, you're becoming better and better.

Lady Of The Lake
09-19-2007, 12:42 AM
you could read that

Pikapie
09-19-2007, 12:47 AM
you could read that

Sweet comic!
Can I join?
Name Terra
Gender Female
Sprites Turtwig
personality I'm usaly calm and happy somtimes silly
extra Try to help

Dreemira
09-19-2007, 06:17 AM
nina and pikooo will be in the next issue and yes i did use the mawile sprites form the daycare i asked the person who posted them

You didn't actually ask, all you said was you were using them, without giving me a chance to say if I even wanted you to use them.:susp:

EDIT: 400th post! :3

-Pichu Boy-
09-19-2007, 05:45 PM
Nice new issue, but you've saved as .jpg

I know you've been told this before, but try to save as .png. If it's not in the dro-down menu when selecting what type to save it as, I THINK it should work if you type 'ubercoolname.png'. Of cours,e you wouldn't put ubercoolname, you'd put what you wanted it to be called XD

Other than that, can't wait for the next one.

Ninaiso
09-19-2007, 06:24 PM
Yay! ^^ I luv your comic! :3

Shadow Eevee
09-19-2007, 07:56 PM
There are lots of grammar and typing mistakes in that issue. That Gardevoir's personality makes me remember someone...

DarkLugiaMaster Gir
09-19-2007, 08:13 PM
Name:Jason(Absol)Antiono(Todadile)
Gender:Both Male
Spriteshttp://i10.tinypic.com/6b08ndj.png
personalityJason:Kind,Smart,Fun,Annoying yet in a cute way.Antonio:Sam except Jason is smartiter and keeps brining it up.
extra:Jason:Will do anything for a PB&J,Favorite lines,says gets and wanteded and stuff like that,favorite lines:I am better than you,Awesome,says like and whatever alot,A monkeys like a chicken except with out the wings ans beak(so in this case an Aipoms like a Pidgey except with out the wings and beaks).Antonio:Likes whoever Jason likes secretly will say if they leave,Loikes to play with toys,eats lots of candy,Favorite lines:I know a song that gets on everybody's nerves,everybody's nerves,everybody's nerves,I know a song that gets on everybody's nerves,and this is how it goes!Pick your Nose!,he sings this repeatedly,I am the creature of the dark,I dare ya to...(you fill in the blanks),other facts with them together,both hyper....VERY VERY VERY HYPER!!!!,Antonio is some what annoying in a cute way too,when they get together to long they start singing....[SIZE="7"]IT'S PEANUT BUTTER JELLY TIME!!!!,They are almost exactley the same most of the time,they argue alot but always make up,and are the bestest friends.
*Sorry about Jason Lack of Absol Sprites.
Edithttp://i238.photobucket.com/albums/ff67/DarkLugiaMaster/JasonandAntonio-1.jpg Is it now fixelated?

Pikapie
09-19-2007, 08:14 PM
Name:Jason(Absol)Antiono(Todadile)
Gender:Both Male
Spriteshttp://i10.tinypic.com/6b08ndj.png
personalityJason:Kind,Smart,Fun,Annoying yet in a cute way.Antonio:Sam except Jason is smartiter and keeps brining it up.
extra:Jason:Will do anything for a PB&J,Favorite lines,says gets and wanteded and stuff like that,favorite lines:I am better than you,Awesome,says like and whatever alot,A monkeys like a chicken except with out the wings ans beak(so in this case an Aipoms like a Pidgey except with out the wings and beaks).Antonio:Likes whoever Jason likes secretly will say if they leave,Loikes to play with toys,eats lots of candy,Favorite lines:I know a song that gets on everybody's nerves,everybody's nerves,everybody's nerves,I know a song that gets on everybody's nerves,and this is how it goes!Pick your Nose!,he sings this repeatedly,I am the creature of the dark,I dare ya to...(you fill in the blanks),other facts with them together,both hyper....VERY VERY VERY HYPER!!!!,Antonio is some what annoying in a cute way too,when they get together to long they start singing....[SIZE="7"]IT'S PEANUT BUTTER JELLY TIME!!!!,They are almost exactley the same most of the time,they argue alot but always make up,and are the bestest friends.
*Sorry about Jason Lack of Absol Sprites.

Dont do jpg
do png or tiff

DarkLugiaMaster Gir
09-19-2007, 08:23 PM
Me know,ImageShack won't work and TinyPic atuamaticly converts it,

Lady Of The Lake
09-19-2007, 09:27 PM
yeah thats why my thing is saved as jpg tiny pis converted it

DarkLugiaMaster Gir
09-19-2007, 09:34 PM
http://img2.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/5adfe252dd.png (http://www.freeimagehosting.net/)pretty sure me fixed it

RawrIsMyMiddleName
09-19-2007, 09:41 PM
Me know,ImageShack won't work and TinyPic atuamaticly converts it,

No, if you save as PNG it comes out PNG. I use Tinypic sometimes.

DarkLugiaMaster Gir
09-19-2007, 09:46 PM
Well it doesn't always work then usehttp://freeimagehosting.net/upload.phpIt is awesome,it does it what ever you do.

RawrIsMyMiddleName
09-19-2007, 09:53 PM
Well it doesn't always work then usehttp://freeimagehosting.net/upload.phpIt is awesome,it does it what ever you do.

Exactly the same as Tinypic, whatever you do, it works. Nothing is wrong with it.

kamiam
09-19-2007, 09:53 PM
this sounds very intersesing my comic card is in my sig....oh my name is marinda in the comic please and i SHOULD be a female!

Pikapie
09-19-2007, 09:58 PM
Name:Teddy
Gender:Female
http://www.spriters-resource.com/nintendo/pokemon/pkmndung/display.php?file=pkmndung_teddiursa.PNG
personality:She's happy and usaly likes to help

Lady Of The Lake
09-19-2007, 11:08 PM
wow i would heav never thought yall would like this comic so much its better then my last one

ohh pikapie i need you to give me face sets if you want to be in it

kamiam
09-19-2007, 11:26 PM
what about ME??? i wana be in too...now i sad..me now talk wird

Lady Of The Lake
09-20-2007, 10:07 PM
dint wory your in the issue

Lady Of The Lake
09-20-2007, 10:42 PM
http://img2.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/488f2d87e6.png (http://www.freeimagehosting.net/)


hope you like this issue


Ohh im adding another part to the story there is going to be a tornament in this and i need good teams that will be in i dont want alot of pokemon from sprite resorces i want pokemon that are good i mean you can use sprite resorces stuff but not the stuff thats seperated and i only want three in each team so post sets of three i tink this would be a good aditton

Ps. befor i made this i was thinking about makeing a tornament comic so if you want to use this idea of a plain old tornament comic than plz pm me

Venusaur456
09-20-2007, 10:44 PM
This comic is good, but characters appear out of nowhere.

Lady Of The Lake
09-20-2007, 10:48 PM
what do you mean in the begging shes telling the people in the town squareThis comic is good, but characters appear out of nowhere.

Ninaiso
09-21-2007, 12:24 AM
Yay! ^^ I love your comics but could you put your issue's in your first post and then post issue whatever is now up! when you put em on your first page? BTW Awesome Comic! :3 Yay at least some one belived me! <3

kamiam
09-21-2007, 12:39 AM
http://img2.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/488f2d87e6.png (http://www.freeimagehosting.net/)


hope you like this issue


Ohh im adding another part to the story there is going to be a tornament in this and i need good teams that will be in i dont want alot of pokemon from sprite resorces i want pokemon that are good i mean you can use sprite resorces stuff but not the stuff thats seperated and i only want three in each team so post sets of three i tink this would be a good aditton

Ps. befor i made this i was thinking about makeing a tornament comic so if you want to use this idea of a plain old tornament comic than plz pm me
sounds intersecting maybe i should post stuff..

-Pichu Boy-
09-21-2007, 07:02 AM
kamiam, word of advice, don't quote huge posts like that. It annoys some people, because they have to keep scrolling down.

And watergirl, great new issue. But 'distroy' is actually spelled 'destroy'. And it's 'Kyogre', not 'Kyoger'

Sorry if I sound like a snob who corrects every single little mistake, I'm actually trying to help :oops:

Oh, and you saved as .png! Good job!

DarkLugiaMaster Gir
09-21-2007, 08:05 PM
Awesome new issue!!I love that you put Jason and Antonio in it:biggrin:.Keep it up,i can't wait for the next issue!

Lady Of The Lake
09-21-2007, 09:43 PM
yeah i cant make the next issue tell i get some teams of 3 and stuff i dont want it to be main stuff from spriters resorces and the stuff from the dex is black and when u put whit on it you cant see the out lines so i need some sprites

DarkLugiaMaster Gir
09-21-2007, 09:47 PM
Click copy,then in paint click paste,all you have to do is get rid of the blue backround,oh and around like page 60 or so in the help thread theirs a link to over 300 different sprite.

Lady Of The Lake
09-21-2007, 09:49 PM
can you give me the link for the page

pikahero2
09-21-2007, 09:50 PM
Watergirl What Can I say Your Very Good Now!:happy:

Cogi276
09-21-2007, 09:51 PM
yeah i cant make the next issue tell i get some teams of 3 and stuff i dont want it to be main stuff from spriters resorces and the stuff from the dex is black and when u put whit on it you cant see the out lines so i need some sprites

If thats the case ........

Name:Cogi (Plusle) + Megas (Minum)
Gender: Both Male and Brothers
http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u172/cogi276/PMD%20Sprites/Plusleminumspritesheet.png
Personality: Cogi likes to pull pranks, but however while Megas is younger he is more mature

Name: Flame
Gender: Male
http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u172/cogi276/PMD%20Sprites/Charmanderoverworld3.png
Personaly: He is a bit quite and and shy but he will fight if needed .....

They are a 3 person team called Team "Fire and Sparks"!

~Cogi~

Lady Of The Lake
09-21-2007, 09:55 PM
ok thanks

Cogi276
09-21-2007, 09:58 PM
ok thanks

I was waiting to see how good the comic would be before singing up and this one turned out pretty good so I was gonna sign up soon ..... Then you said that you needed a 3 team so I included my charmander ......

~Cogi~

Lady Of The Lake
09-21-2007, 10:01 PM
well thats good that alot of people thank my comics good

DarkLugiaMaster Gir
09-21-2007, 10:05 PM
http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/foru...ad.php?t=26810Here you go,and did the copy thing work?

Lady Of The Lake
09-21-2007, 10:07 PM
yes my copy works

DarkLugiaMaster Gir
09-21-2007, 11:03 PM
If you still need teams i'm making one for my new comic,i'll give it to you if my damn computer will show the images i need,and not blurry or inverted or anything like that.

Lady Of The Lake
09-21-2007, 11:13 PM
ok that works $ word rules

kamiam
09-21-2007, 11:33 PM
when is the next issue?

Lady Of The Lake
09-21-2007, 11:46 PM
when i get more pokemon

Pikapie
09-26-2007, 08:59 PM
wow i would heav never thought yall would like this comic so much its better then my last one

ohh pikapie i need you to give me face sets if you want to be in it

Uh ya about that I cant post pictures on here excpt on paint
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/24/teddygb3.th.png (http://img259.imageshack.us/my.php?image=teddygb3.png)

Vespking
09-27-2007, 07:11 PM
You've got a good idea but I think you could shorten the amount of text under each picture and try to improve your spelling, that and I don't like the way that Muncklax never blinks or puts his arms down.

Pikapie
10-31-2007, 08:48 PM
Hello it's been a loooooonnnngggg time I hope you still make the comic. I like them:hungry:
oh and by the way happy halloween!:biggrin: