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Golden-Silver
10-01-2007, 11:04 PM
a young hot-headed cocky trainer is about embark on a journey through kantos sevii islands were he will see legends,battle,discover and learn on this adventure
Bios
Bio 1 (http://s230.photobucket.com/albums/ee146/pokemon-spriter/?action=view&current=bios.jpg)

issue 1
Issue 1 (http://s230.photobucket.com/albums/ee146/pokemon-spriter/?action=view&current=Gold.jpg)
issue 2
blast burn! (http://s230.photobucket.com/albums/ee146/pokemon-spriter/?action=view&current=comic2.jpg)

Black Label
10-01-2007, 11:21 PM
not to be mean but hat stunk like a sack of poopy diapers. why do your sprites look weird? also 2 attacks and its dead? what about a health bar. please dont start a comic unless u add good detail that wasnt real interesting

Golden-Silver
10-01-2007, 11:48 PM
i couldn't find the health bars and it'll get more interesting as it goes on just you wait

Black Label
10-01-2007, 11:59 PM
2nd one is even worse bad character pictures, plus no dialog plus its to small. and if u cant find health bars, make them. please read other comics and see how theirs is

Shadow Eevee
10-02-2007, 01:10 AM
I don't know if you've realized this, but your comic seems awfully alike with Wario's. (http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?t=44857)

It shares a few similar features.


And by the way, a teen is not 11. You have to save as .png, and you need grammer!

Claona
10-02-2007, 02:18 AM
Where did you get those Gold/Silver character sprites and overworlds? You definetly didn't make them.

Golden-Silver
10-02-2007, 05:20 AM
got em from spriters-resource.com

Golden-Silver
10-02-2007, 05:22 AM
im gonna have to abandon this
okay i will be starting one on d/p adventures

Shadow Eevee
10-02-2007, 08:22 PM
got em from spriters-resource.com
Then you have to give credit. Since when do they let you use the revamps?
im gonna have to abandon this
okay i will be starting one on d/p adventures
Don't double post, use the edit button.

Black Label
10-03-2007, 12:14 AM
im gonna have to abandon this
okay i will be starting one on d/p adventures

STOP MAKING MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! No one really likes them and your wasting space in this bourd! please first read other comics and see how They do it. seriosly and put diolog to make readers want more

Golden-Silver
10-03-2007, 02:11 AM
im not making it yet im gona learn as much as i can so it willbe great also i need the sinnoh towns