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shinyporygon
10-08-2007, 12:00 PM
heres my new comic:http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/2868/pokepals1introbu5.png hope u like it.

Galactic Spriter
10-08-2007, 12:04 PM
....Fails

Grammar: No capitilazition

Text: Well its kinda short and some are hard to see.

Plot: Doesn't really have one just, "Dawn comes over get tux cleaned call bob."

Other: You don't have a real background. I don't suggest you make your own unless you know how. Go to http://www.spriters-resource.com/nintendo/pokemon/ for backgrounds

Total Grade: E

Galactic Grunt

Xtra
10-08-2007, 12:42 PM
E means it's an A plus, GG.

Meh...it isn't organized much. Try to get some backgrounds and NEVER use RSE anything with DP.

Galactic Spriter
10-08-2007, 12:44 PM
E means it's an A plus, GG.

Meh...it isn't organized much. Try to get some backgrounds and NEVER use RSE anything with DP.
Ok, but thats not really a Dawn sprite if you haven't noticed. Why not put FRLG Hero instead?

Galactic Grunt