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Kirby Grunt
10-08-2007, 11:17 PM
here they are:
1: http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/comicone-1.png
2: http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/Comic2.png
3: http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/comic3.png
4:http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/comic4.png
5:http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/comic5.png
6: <NEW> http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/comic6.png

Wanna make a cameo r something? heres the forms:
elite four:
pokemon:
name:
Custom Sprites:

Gym leader:
Pokemon:
Badge:
Name:
award:
Custom sprites:
Any specific location?:

Trainer:( random battle)
name:
type: (ace, youngster, etc.)
Custom sprites?:

Trainer: (for comic)
Name:
Pokemon:
Custom sprites:
Personality:
Short apperance or throughout Series?:

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Im always looking for Map makers! And town/ route namers/numberers.
locations so far:
Town 1: http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/town1.jpg
Town 2:http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/town2.jpg
Route 1:http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/route1.jpg

Form for town:
Name:
Number(what time do you come to it?):
For for Route:
Number:
Pokemon there:
Form for inside a building (gym etc.):
Where is it at?:
Type of building:(home Gym Pokecenter Hotel etc.)
If gym: Which one and what kind of puzzles?
I use Advanced Map for my towns and locations.

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Banners:
http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/buttonPP.png (http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?t=67160)
http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/buttonPP.png (http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?t=67160)
http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/machopgb8.png (http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?t=67160)
http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/machopgb8.png (http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?t=67160)

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Characters:
Trainer: Dont really know what you mean.
Name: Myn
Pokemon: Cyndaquil
Custom sprites: http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z53/poiuylkjhgmnbvc/sd.png
Personality: Very Stubborn. Also watches all battles
Short apperance or throughout Series?: Series
Click teh arrow....



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Anything i forgot? Dont be afraid to ask!
Can someone grade the comic so far?
And BTW I AM going to make the frame works and so such better.

Galactic Spriter
10-08-2007, 11:19 PM
All of your comics do not work....

Galactic Grunt

Kirby Grunt
10-08-2007, 11:25 PM
All of your comics do not work....

Galactic Grunt
How so?
Why?
What do i need to improve on?
Edit: Oh you meant the links.. Ill fix those up now.. 0.0;
Edit2: ok fixed them!

Wingull
10-09-2007, 12:16 AM
Cool Comic.
I'll Join as soon as my make myself a Trainer. >.>

Kirby Grunt
10-09-2007, 12:19 AM
Cool Comic.
I'll Join as soon as my make myself a Trainer. >.>
Really? Thanks. This being my first comic and all... I thought people were going to flame me.

Anastasia-R
10-09-2007, 12:29 AM
Needs some kind of help...Can't tell what though...

!~A.R~!

Kirby Grunt
10-09-2007, 12:40 AM
Cool Comic.
I'll Join as soon as my make myself a Trainer. >.>
I would refer it to be custom made but whatever floats your boat. >.> There only needs to be overworld sprites BTW.

Kirby Grunt
10-09-2007, 06:42 AM
Bump...? Sorry but.... No one really posted here yet.. Do I have to be patient?

Golden-Silver
10-09-2007, 07:26 AM
no its not very good and two reasons why

1.its very messy
2.speech isnt very good

Kirby Grunt
10-09-2007, 07:31 AM
no its not very good and two reasons why

1.its very messy
2.speech isnt very good

Yes I already planned to work on those two parts. But besides those Can you grade anything else?

Kirby Grunt
10-10-2007, 03:09 AM
Bump...? Sorry but.... No one really posted here yet.. Do I have to be patient?
Can anyone grade this yet?

Dragon01
10-10-2007, 06:23 PM
Can anyone grade this yet?
Okay honestly, I don't think it is at all any good. If you look at other peoples comics and see how they are planned out then you will see the differance between this comic and theirs. Basically work on these things:

1. Layout of the 'strip', use boxes, lines to separate, how many boxes on one line?
2. Layout of speech, Try and keep to one color per character. Put the speech in a speech bubble or put it out side the box.
3. Enjoy making the comics, if you don't like it then no-one else will.

Overall Rate: Sorry but its a 2/10 from me.

Kirby Grunt
10-10-2007, 10:48 PM
Okay honestly, I don't think it is at all any good. If you look at other peoples comics and see how they are planned out then you will see the differance between this comic and theirs. Basically work on these things:

1. Layout of the 'strip', use boxes, lines to separate, how many boxes on one line?
2. Layout of speech, Try and keep to one color per character. Put the speech in a speech bubble or put it out side the box.
3. Enjoy making the comics, if you don't like it then no-one else will.

Overall Rate: Sorry but its a 2/10 from me.
So what would the over all grade be? I already know THOSE problems. But i meant grade the sprites town plot etc.

Kirby Grunt
10-11-2007, 03:09 AM
1.)Bump?
2.) Im making comic 6 right now. Everything is being fixed. This will be one step closer to a better comic:
Better speech
speech Bubbles
Not all clashed together.
These are just some of the things that have been improved. And there are many much more (:b) things i can still work on.

pokerufan7
10-11-2007, 05:53 AM
Trainer: Dont really know what you mean.
Name: Myn
Pokemon: Cyndaquil
Custom sprites: http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z53/poiuylkjhgmnbvc/sd.png
Personality: Very Stubborn. Also watches all battles
Short apperance or throughout Series?: Series

Kirby Grunt
10-11-2007, 07:16 AM
Ok your accepted. And also. When you say he "watches all battles" does that mean he almost NEVER battles? and you will mkae your appearence in comic 6 or 7.
Edit: Your name is Luke
Edit2: My computer crashed so i have to start off on halfway through comic 6 ... ]:

Kirby Grunt
10-14-2007, 05:44 AM
1. Bump..? this is on the second page..
2. redid the 6th comic!
3. Still accepting applications.
*cough* wingull *cough*

DarkLugiaMaster Gir
10-14-2007, 06:04 PM
Trainer: (for comic)
Name:Tid(Girl)Dib(Boy)Jason(Boy)
Pokemon:Dib:Wobbufett or Pineco,Donphan,Likatoung or Quilfish,Luxaray,Ditto and Metagross Tid:Shiny Charizard named Coal,Bannete,Swampert,Luxaray,Magnezone,and Chatot Jason:Umbreon(Male)Nickname:Todd,Crobat(Female)Nic kname:BatGirl,MewTwo (N/A)Nickname:SuperKitty or Blastiose(Male)Nickname:Splashums,Quigsire(Male)Ni ckName:SplashumsJr. or Breeloom(Female)Nickname Puff or Mightyena(Female)Nickname:Flavor,Staraptor(Female) Nickname:OoniJr. or Swellow(Female)Nickname:Ooni
Custom sprites:http://img3.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/19dce999d6.png
Personality:Tid is the brains,she's smart and know's it,she's also brave and seriose(and likes Dib),Dib is nice and sweet,he is a bit weird though(he talks street or tries sometimes as i'm gonna Pawn you oldschool),he want's a Deoxys wich he can never get he also think all Clefaries and pre and evo's are evil aliens,he also uses a special type of pokeball called SpaceBalls as he has in his sprite,Jason imature and annoying,he is the leader of the group,yet at times a perve,he acts tough but is a scaredy cat,he is also fun but again annoying but nice at least,also they work for TeamDarkness a team of Pokemon Helpers Dispite the name,oh and their unit is Unit GIR.
Short apperance or throughout Series?:Throghout

STL22
10-15-2007, 12:52 AM
No offence but they weren't very proffecionally made...

Kirby Grunt
10-15-2007, 04:23 AM
Gir can you make them more like non-elite pokemon since there just begining.. But you can keep the Shiny charmander.

DarkLugiaMaster Gir
10-15-2007, 09:56 PM
Pokemon:Dib:Wobbufett or Pineco,
Donphan,
Likatoung or Quilfish,Luxio,
Ditto and Beldum

Tid:Shiny Charmander named Coal,
Shuppet,
Mudkip,
Luxio,
Magneton,
and Chatot

Jason:Eevee8,will say later,that will evolve into Umbreon8(Male)Nickname:Todd,
Zubat(Female)Nickname:BatGirl,
MewTwo (N/A)Nickname:SuperKitty or Squirtle(Male)Nickname:Splashums,
Whooper(Male)NickName:SplashumsJr. or Shroomish(Female)Nickname Puff or Poochenay(Female)Nickname:Flavor,
Starvia(Female) Nickname:OoniJr. or TailowFemale)Nickname:Ooni
Will explain about Todd later I'll Pm you it if you want(maybe you could use it in your comic:biggrin:)And the Ors you don't use put them in my PC and let them be used every now and again.

Kirby Grunt
10-15-2007, 10:47 PM
I dont mean to be mean or bossy or anything but.. Can you put it organized something like this:
pokemon:TID:
***
***
Jason:
*****
****
etc.

Golden-Silver
10-15-2007, 11:09 PM
i wanna sign up so i will get the sprites later

name:Lukas
age:12
pokemon:bulbasaur (saur) bagon (mence) shiny zubat (bat) pikachu (chu) kadabra (kazam) shinx (lux) (evolve them all soon)
position:make him your rival

Kirby Grunt
10-16-2007, 04:39 AM
kk gold silver but those are to elite for the time being. But so far you can keep saur bagon and lux

pikahero2
10-17-2007, 06:34 PM
Okay Kirbster Grading time.......
Speech-C
Plot-B+ Its a pretty Good Plot.
Towns - A - There Good towns expet just make them Neater.
Overall- It has to be a "B-" Hope its okay.

Kirby Grunt
10-18-2007, 07:48 AM
Speech- yes that twas fair. Thats my weakness in Comics
plot- I have loads planned ahead for a way better plot. So be ready...
Towns - As in.. how? Hw can i make them neater?
Overall- It is OK. Do you think this is a good comic for a first?

DarkLugiaMaster Gir
10-18-2007, 07:42 PM
awesome comic,whens the next issue coming....maybe you would want to sing up for mine