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Golden-Silver
10-09-2007, 06:45 AM
second comic coming soon it will be up soon!
info:this is about a hot head trainer and his chimchar as they go and adventure

prolouge 1:
how it started (http://s230.photobucket.com/albums/ee146/pokemon-spriter/?action=view&current=comic1finito.jpg)

comics:
issue 1:our battle (http://s230.photobucket.com/albums/ee146/pokemon-spriter/?action=view&current=comic12.jpg)



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comic name:
age:
pokemon:
sprites:
personalitty:

Kirby Grunt
10-09-2007, 07:02 AM
Can ya specify:
Is it going to be custom made region?
Fakemon or pokemon?
Whcih region?
What are the starters?
etc.

Golden-Silver
10-09-2007, 08:14 AM
you just have to find out!!
neary ready

Kirby Grunt
10-09-2007, 08:15 AM
What?! .. Make the first 3 or 2 comics then start accepting forms....

Golden-Silver
10-09-2007, 08:28 AM
i will make my comic the way i want!

Kirby Grunt
10-09-2007, 08:31 AM
I will make my comic the way I want!
^ More annoying then you think.^
Ok. Ok. Dont get angry.... I just thought... ya know... you might want to inform peeps a lil more before you start it.

Golden-Silver
10-09-2007, 08:43 AM
its kool sorry for being mad

Kirby Grunt
10-09-2007, 09:45 AM
its kool sorry for being mad
No problem. Heres my grading scale:
Plot so far: B+. Love how Bill is a proffesor! Its also cool that you added a twist: Trainer vs. Proffesor
Grammer: D Only a ONE cap. and you misspelled a few words too. No punctuation whasoever.
Sprites: A
Speech: B- could be better.. But at least its longer then mine.....
Overall: B ~ This is probobly gunna be a pretty good comic

pikahero2
10-09-2007, 04:07 PM
Hmmmmm.......A Few grade's Too.


Text/Speech/Spelling:~D~A bit messy with the Words No caps,Or "I"'s In it Just "i"'s you have.

Sprites/Positinoning(Typo Sorry):~A~ Very nice,neat Too.

Plot so far/Story:~B+~ Nice,Great how the Prof battle's Instead of the rival.

Overall:~B~ Nice comic it will be good if you dont Quit it Kay?

Tips:
To make people join put the Link in your Siggy Kay?

Dragon01
10-09-2007, 05:41 PM
Heres my form for the comic that has only had rating posts :D

comic name:Ben or Jason what ever suits you
age:16
pokemon:Arcanine, Charizard, Dragonite, Gyarados, Luxray, Staravia. (Also has a metagross and electrivire that is in P.C but often used :D)
sprites:http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/1153/jasonae3.png (http://imageshack.us)
personalitty:Confidant, never scared, always up for a challange whether it is possible or not, friendly, funny, takes great care of his pokemon.
Can I be a friend/companion.

Can't wait for next issue!

Golden-Silver
10-09-2007, 09:44 PM
okay how he starts out with treeko im changing it too chimchar
also dragon01 you'll be my friend and rival and companion

Golden-Silver
10-10-2007, 10:08 AM
bump.......

Golden-Silver
10-10-2007, 09:49 PM
bump...

Lady Of The Lake
10-10-2007, 09:59 PM
just so you know in the prolog you said you picked treeco in issue one you piked chimchar so your story dusent follow its prolog so i dont plan on reading the next issue

Golden-Silver
10-11-2007, 06:20 AM
if you didint pay attention to the earlier posts i said i am changing it to chimchar

Kirby Grunt
10-11-2007, 08:19 AM
If you didn't pay attention to the earlier posts, I said I am changing it to Chimchar.

1.) He didnt know dont get made at im

2.) Still more annoying then you think.
3.) Proper grammar...

Galactic Spriter
10-11-2007, 12:20 PM
1.) He didn't know. Don't get mad at him

2.) Still more annoying then you think.
3.) Proper grammar...
Why are you grading peoples grammar you made mistakes too!

Galactic Grunt

Black Label
10-12-2007, 01:25 AM
all you have to do is change the word treecko to chimchar. some people dont read the other posts like me mostly i just read the issiuse but since it was your comic i had to step it.

its is WAY better than last time your sprites look better but always save as png. PNG=PwNaGe

Kirby Grunt
10-12-2007, 09:00 AM
Why are you grading peoples grammar you made mistakes too!

Galactic Grunt
Actually "im" is him. I'm just used to an accent. Anyway

Change the grammar in the comic and I'll join.

Golden-Silver
10-12-2007, 10:20 AM
okay then next issh almost up

icer
10-12-2007, 12:25 PM
1.) He didnt know dont get made at im

2.) Still more annoying then you think.
3.) Proper grammar...

And you think hes annoying? wow... who really cares about proper grammar when making a regular post, k? so you can just go ahead and stop now


love the comic, but you might want to make it clear, and change the prologue to where it says he chooses chimchar, most people dont read the first posts :oops: