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Kaioo
10-26-2007, 03:58 PM
Right, this is a Star Wars Fic. So, Enjoy!





Chapter 1- The Consortium's Homeworld
A-Quadrant, Hypori
Lt. Fixton sighed, as he patrolled along the hot landscape of A-Quadrant.
Next to him, a M-1A Tank trundled along the ground, breaking the silence of the area, apart from the squad's breathing. This was a routine check-up. They would patrol the area 3 times, and then head back to base.
This was the second time they were patrolling, and Lt. Fixton raised one arm to shield his eyes from the sun. He cursed under his breath for the planet being so hot.
Hypori much resembled Tatooine in many ways, yet Hypori was much hotter. Lt. Fixton swatted away a sandfly from his face, mumbling about how annoying the sandflies were, and the fact that their stings were so agitating.
The M-1A Tank stopped it's movement, and Lt. Fixton and his squadmates followed quick suit. The top of the Tank opened up, to reveal a young man, a frown on his face.
"Lt. Fixton, I've detected something." The young man said, his frown growing even bigger.
At that, Lt. Fixton walked closer to the M-1A Tank, and looked at the young man.
"What is it Private?" Lt. Fixton asked.
"Well, sir, Normally we would of detected the local Twi'leks on the radar." The Private said.
"Go on." Lt. Fixton said, anxious as to what the Private was speaking of.
"The thing is," The Private continued,"I haven't detected them on the radar at all!"
"What?" Lt. Fixton exclaimed, shock on his face,"Are you sure?"
"Absolutely Positive." The Private replied, frowning again.
"This is really confusing." Lt. Fixton said.
"Sir, I heard movement down here!" A soldier shouted, motioning his gun down to the squad's left.
"Have a look then." Lt. Fixton said,"And get a move on Cpl."
The Corporal ran about a quarter of the way down the way he had motioned to earlier, before storming out of 2 caves came about 30 Twi'leks and some Humans.
"What the?" The Corporal exclaimed in shock,"Lt. There's Organisation men he-"
The Corporal did not finish his sentence, for the Twi'leks and the 20 Humans began firing at the Corporal, bullets battering through his clothes, killing him.
The whole squad turned in shock towards the gunfire, their guns at the ready.
The Private in the Tank quickly closed the top of the Tank, and started to move the gun towards the enemies.
"Fire!" Lt. Fixton shouted, firing his gun at the enemy.
A big gunfight ensued, and just when the squad began shooting, 5 Twi'leks were killed right then and there.
Lt. Fixton took one eye of the fighting and turned his attention to his squad, all around him they were getting hit, and dropping to the floor.
"If they keep this up, we're gonna die." Lt. Fixton groaned in horror.

Just at that moment, the M-1A Tank fired a shell, exploding, and killing most of the enemy.
"Sir, the Gun's Jammed!" The Private shouted, before activating the Machine Gun, which was abrudptly(sp?) destroyed by the enemy, who kept pouring out of the caves.
"There's too many!" One soldier screamed, just moments before dropping to the floor to his death.
"They got Bullet-Proof vests on!" Another soldier cried.
That was when an idea hit Lt. Fixton.
"Switch your guns to Number 1!" Lt. Fixton shouted.
Number 1 was the old fashioned laser guns, which shot colored blasts depending on your gun.
The whole squad followed orders, as the Tank was opened, and the Private inside jumped out, shooting Blue Laser-fire at the enemies.
Blue Lasers flew down the pathway, towards the Twi'leks and Humans.
While Red Laser flew up the pathway, towards the squadmembers.
After a long time of fighting, the Twi'leks began to retreat, leaving the Organisation soldiers to fight for themselves.
The Organisation soldiers were quickly cut down without any trouble, and Lt. Fixton wiped his forehead in relief, sweat now deeply embedded in his uniform.
He surveyed the damage.
13 of his Squad dead, for 49 Twi'leks and 20 Organisation soldiers. Not bad, if he could say so himself.
But, there was the problem of their Tank being in-operational and unrepairable.
This was going to be a long walk home, with these problems added on, along with the possibilites of more attacks, which Lt. Fixton's squad would not be able to handle, he decided to go on the comm network, and contact HQ.

~2 hours later~
Lt. Fixton sighed as he sat in the back of a L8RT Transport vehicle.
It was much faster travel to HQ, but it was uncomfortable, and very hot.
Already, 2 of his squadmembers had passed out from the heat, and he had groaned as they went over a bump.
-At least we survived.- Lt. Fixton kept thinking, glad that he'd survived today to report to his Commander.
With that, Lt. Fixton relaxed, before falling asleep.

DarkAmethyst
10-26-2007, 04:21 PM
Pretty interesting, though same grammer and, like, one spelling error (that I can see) were detected. I'm guessing this is based off of your RP? ^^

Kaioo
10-26-2007, 04:37 PM
Yeah it is.

Chapter 2-The Assault
Headquarters, Hypori
Lt. Fixton stood in the Commander's office, as the Commander walked back and forth.
"You got attacked while on patrol?" The Commander asked,"And by Organisation soldiers?"
The Commander turned around, and looked angrily at Fixton.
"Y-Yes sir." Lt. Fixton whimpered.
At that, the Commander cursed under his breath before looking back up at Fixton.
"Make sure this doesn't happen again!" The Commander growled, anger in his eyes.
"Yes, sir, Kyris!" Lt. Fixton exclaimed, saluting the Leader of the Consortium, before running out of the office.

The door opened, and a middle-aged Talortai came in.
"You wanted to see me, Kyris?" The Talortai asked.
Kyris turned around, and looked at the Talortai.
"Assemble the Fleet. I want all ships and crew to Assemble ASAP!" Kyris shouted in rage,"And Don't take No for an answer! I want them there RIGHT NOW!"
The Talortai didn't flinch as Kyris shouted angrily, he was used to this.
At that, The Talortai ran out of the office, and went about his orders.

Headquarters, Med Room, Hypori
Lt. Fixton lay on a medbed, as nurses tended to his wounds. He'd been hit with atleast 40 bullets, but luckily, they hadn't hit any major organs.
After what seemed like hours, the nurses stopped tending to his wounds, and he slowly sat up.
"Thank you." Lt. Fixton said, nodding to the nurses, before standing back up, and putting back on his shirt, which was still doused with sweat.
Lt. Fixton walked out of the Med Room, before sighing, and heading for some rest...

Space, Above Hypori
Kyris stood in the com room of the Himorax. The Himorax was a Super Star Destroyer, and Kyris' Flagship, as well as the emblem of the Consortium.
"Admiral, I want every ship to be ready for my command." Kyris ordered, staring at a Wookie Admiral, who had learnt to speak Basic.
"Yes sir, Right Away." The Admiral said, saluting Kyris, before turning off the com system.
Kyris too turned off his com system, and sighed, sitting back down into his chair.

Kyris was alerted by a beeping from the com system, and he got back up, turning on the com system.
"What?" Kyris asked, then realising that the image was of the Admiral, and he had his usual grin on his face.
"Everything's ready Kyris." the Admiral said.
"Well Done. The Assault will begin in 3 standard Hours, Tell the men to get some rest." Kyris said, turning off the com system, before sighing once more.

DarkAmethyst
10-26-2007, 07:25 PM
Meh, a bit short, but still pretty good. Since this is based off the RP will this be the 'storyline' to the plot of the RP? (Like where the characters start and all)

Kaioo
10-26-2007, 07:38 PM
Meh, a bit short, but still pretty good. Since this is based off the RP will this be the 'storyline' to the plot of the RP? (Like where the characters start and all)

Uhm.. the second chapter is happening in the RP.. but the first is a *SPOILER*
cos Abbi is playing a ground soldier in Lt. Fixton's squad.. so.. I just *SPOILERED* my own thread XD..

Chapter 3- Assault Not Happening.. Improving the Base
Space, Above Hypori
3 Hours passed, and Kyris was annoyed.
He had decided that they wouldn't attack the enemy, for why should he act recklessly?
He opened his com system.
"Admiral." Kyris said,"Tell the ships to go back to their posts."
The Admiral looked shocked as Kyris said this, and stared at him, his eyes wide open in shock.
"What?" The Admiral exclaimed."I thought you wanted us to attack?"
Kyris looked at the Wookie Admiral, and frowned.
"I know, I'm sorry for the trouble." Kyris said,"But I realised I was being Reckless."
At that, Kyris leaned closer to the com system.
"And Admiral." Kyris began,"Tell the troops to improve our space Stations. I don't want anymore Organisation soldiers getting on Hypori. Do I make Myself Clear?!"
"Yes sir!" The Admiral shouted, saluting Kyris, before he turned off his com system.
Kyris turned off his com system, and got in his personal 8TRONE Fighter, and landed back down on Hypori.

F-Quadrant, Hypori
Kyris looked around, and noticed he'd landed in F-Quadrant.
Kyris frowned, before sighing.
"Ahh well..I haven't been to this outpost to pick up it's Report yet." Kyris said, shrugging, and began walking.

Nearby, unknown to Kyris, 3 Humans were watching him.
"That's the Consortium Leader?" The Middle Human asked.
The Human on the right turned to the one in the Middle.
"John are you thick?" He exclaimed,"Yes, that's the leader!"
John looked at the person who'd called him thick.
"I was only wondering Alex." John said, sighing.
"Shut up both of you." The one on the left said, frowning.
"Sorry Luke." John said.
"Right, let's move." Luke said, standing up.
John and Alex also stood up, and began running off to tell Hamu, their leader.


Throne Room, Coruscant
2 men knelt before their leader.
"Rise." Their leader said, a evil grin on his face.
"Commander, our diversion succeeded." One of the men said, saluting their Commander.

DarkAmethyst
10-27-2007, 01:40 AM
Mm, pretty good, pretty good. Though they're getting a bit short there. I'd advise you make 'em a bit longer, so as not to risk the thread being locked.

Kaioo
10-27-2007, 02:13 AM
Mm, pretty good, pretty good. Though they're getting a bit short there. I'd advise you make 'em a bit longer, so as not to risk the thread being locked.

Advice taken =D.

Chapter 4- Status Reports
F-Quadrant, Hypori
Kyris crunched through the sand of F-Quadrant, sweat dripping down his face. He rose one arm in front of him, to shield himself from a bombardment of Sand, and he sighed.
"Who goes there?" A voice shouted.
Kyris lowered his arm, to reveal 3 soldiers of the Consortium standing there, and they instantly had a look of shock on their faces when they realised who the person in front of them was.
"Kyris?" The Closest Soldier asked,"What are you doing here?"

Kyris looked at the Closest soldier, a small smile on his face.
"My ship landed nearby," Kyris explained,"And I haven't had that report yet Sgt. Donadan."
Sgt. Donadan looked at Kyris, before saluting him.
"Sorry Kyris." Sgt. Donadan said.
"Let's go." Kyris said, and began to walk the way he had been walking.
The 3 soldiers quickly followed behind him, as Sgt. Donadan hurriedly walked so he was walking alongside Kyris.
"That's not the only reason your here." Sgt. Donadan said, and Kyris instantly stopped.
Kyris turned his head towards Sgt. Donadan and frowned.
"I also wanted to know what was going on here.. seeing as we lost contact with you 3 months ago." Kyris said, and began walking again.
Sgt. Donadan looked at Kyris.
"We were attacked by the Organisation.. They destroyed our com link, so we were unable to contact HQ." Sgt. Donadan said, cursing under his breath.

~4 hours later~
After a long time of walking, Kyris and the 3 soldiers finally arrived at F-Quadrant Outpost, and they hurriedly entered the building.
As they entered, 30 soldiers twirled around, to face the newcomers, and muttering began to ensue throughout the building.
Sgt. Donadan looked around the area, and sighed, before heading off to the Med Bay.

The word was spreading quickly around the Outpost that Kyris was there, and it was the talk of the day.
"It's been a long time." Kyris said to himself, before turning to the other 2 soldiers."Cpl. Daniels and Cpl. Lance, Good day men."
Cpl. Lance and Cpl. Daniels saluted Kyris, before relaxing, and headed off towards the barracks.
Kyris looked around, and smiled.

F-Quadrant, Med Bay, Hypori
Sgt. Donadan stood at the entrance of the Med Bay, as he surveyed the room. There were atleast 30 injured in here. They just didn't have the supplies to handle with the many being injured.
Sgt. Donadan sighed, and turned around, walking back out of the Med Bay.

F-Quadran,Barracks,Hypori
Sgt. Donadan arrived in the Barracks to find his 2 squadmembers sat on a bunkbed, happily chatting away to some soldiers who'd stayed at the Outpost about the day.
Sgt. Donadan shook his head, before sitting on his bed, and took off his top, and fell asleep on the bed.
-It was too hot on Hypori to sleep with your top on, it could cost you your life.- The slogan of the Outpost resounded amongst Sgt. Donadan's thoughts only moments before he'd fallen asleep.

Headquarters,Shola
Shola wasn't much different from Hypori. Both planets were very hot, but Hypori was much much hotter than Shola.
Lt. Shuran sighed as he looked out of the window, and amongst the landscape.
-The sunset is very beautiful- The Twi'lek thought to himself, a smile appearing on his face.
Suddenly, a Gungan Cpl. Came storming into Lt. Shuran's office, and they saluted each other.
"Shuran, Cmdr. Quinith wants you to sort out these reports." The Gungan Cpl. said, placing a large pile of reports onto Lt. Shuran's desk, and quickly left the room.
Lt. Shuran sighed, and he sat down, and began to look through the reports.
"All in a days work." Lt. Shuran muttered.

Headquarters,Kamino
It was raining. It rained most of the time on Kamino, and Cmdr. Linis hated that fact.
Cmdr. Linis was a Human Commander.
Just then, there was a knock on the door.
"Come in!" Cmdr. Linis said, as a small Twi'lek came in.
"Cmdr." The Twi'lek said, saluting Commander Linis,"I have these files for you."
The Twi'lek placed about 20 Reports onto Cmdr. Linis' desk, before heading out of the room.
-Great, more paperwork- Cmdr. Linis thought, cursing under his breath as he sat down, and began to look through the reports.-Ahh well, this is the job.-

Headquarters,Nal Hutta
Cmdr. Russel sighed as he sat in his chair. Nal Hutta was boring. But, atleast it was better than those hot planets.
Cmdr. Russel opened his eyes once more, quickly being greeted by stacks and stacks of reports sat on his desk. He groaned, as he remembered all the times he'd neglected to fill them out, and decided to start filling them out.
Suddenly, 5 Soldiers came walking through the door, each putting 20 more reports on the already massive stacks of reports, and with a quick salute, the 5 soldiers left the room as fast as they'd entered.
"Damn Reports." Cmdr. Russel muttered under his breath.