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Golden-Silver
10-26-2007, 11:34 PM
welcome to my new comic about kanto region aka the adventures of Rai and Emily

the year is 2010 and everyone thinks team rocket is dead since being destroyed by some trainers. now Rai and emily must venture to defeat the new and improved team shadow Rocket

http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee146/pokemon-spriter/comicprolouge-1.jpg

issue's:

coming soon






bio's

name:Rai Golden
profile:he is our main hero of the story who is eager to win the kanto league
Pokemon:turtwig, bagon, aron
age:12


name:emily blue
profile: a young girl who is talented at battling and travels along with Rai
pokemon:ponyta (maya), wurmple (cassy), murkrow (ashlee), shiny pidgey (obsidian)
age:13

Golden-Silver
10-27-2007, 01:38 AM
why won't anyone post

Ninaiso
10-27-2007, 01:46 AM
why won't anyone post
Well first you need to fix your broken comic links ;3 I had to run through it to see the comic and it's quite nice but needs work on the grammer. I'll join as soon as I get sprites. :3

Golden-Silver
10-27-2007, 01:54 AM
all fixed up and thanks

Shadow Eevee
10-27-2007, 02:18 AM
First off, you got the wrong codes. Try
Comcic Cover (http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee146/pokemon-spriter/comiccover.png)

Prologue (http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee146/pokemon-spriter/comicprolouge.png)

Anyway, you lack alot of skill. Who's the gray person talking? Where are the Pokemon sprites? Also, where did you find the Human sprites for the Comic Cover? Last but not least, your cover needs to be completely re-done.

Golden-Silver
10-27-2007, 02:40 AM
oww damn it i was in such a rush i forgot to add prof rowan

Shadow Eevee
10-27-2007, 03:10 AM
oww damn it i was in such a rush i forgot to add prof rowan
I'm sorry, but I don't think that would make much of a difference.

Kirby Grunt
10-27-2007, 03:17 AM
What happen to your other comics?! Stop making comics that your not going to work with! What like 4 now? Stick with the old one.Stick with the comic, finish the comic, or don't make one at all! And you still have the same problems with all of your comics anyway.

Golden-Silver
10-27-2007, 03:25 AM
who said im not gonna continue with it i will make issue's as fast as i can

Shadow Eevee
10-27-2007, 04:15 PM
Remember it's quality not quanity that matters.

pikahero2
10-27-2007, 08:25 PM
Well SE Covered it its no point in having a comic with like 10 issues and you cant even read any of the issues.

Golden-Silver
10-28-2007, 09:58 AM
edited comic new one that's not all messed up

pikahero2
10-28-2007, 10:00 AM
Heres the problem now.......Whos Emily?

You have to explain all that before the comic starts you have to explain who everyone is.

Emily
10-28-2007, 10:04 AM
Heres the problem now.......Whos Emily?

You have to explain all that before the comic starts you have to explain who everyone is.
*laughs* Emily's me! :happy: Looking good so far, try to remember to capitalize your sentences, though.

Golden-Silver
10-28-2007, 10:07 AM
ohh yeah sorry im not smart

Emily
10-28-2007, 10:09 AM
ohh yeah sorry im not smart
Don't say that about yourself, you just need a bit of coaching. Put a capital letter at the start of every sentence, and put a full stop and the end. It'll make it look quite a bit better. :happy:

Golden-Silver
10-28-2007, 10:12 AM
i will make sure for that in next issh

this comic is gonna be big

pikahero2
10-28-2007, 10:19 AM
Yeah...When he said that he meant for when you post aswell and if you want people to think its good you should fix the format of your front page.

Emily
10-28-2007, 10:22 AM
Yeah...When he said that he meant for when you post aswell and if you want people to think its good you should fix the format of your front page.
Uhm, pardon me if I wasn't the one you were reffering to, but you may notice that the thing above my post count says female?

Golden-Silver
10-28-2007, 10:33 AM
always pay attention to the gender lol

Xtra
10-28-2007, 02:57 PM
Urrr...First, it should the title should look like this. Just saying Kanto Region Hero's is saying the hero owns something. Second, maybe you should open up Microsoft Word when your doing this. Type in what each character says, then copy and paste it into your text box. This way, it has grammar, fixed my MW. Cause' not to be hurtful, but the grammar on this is pretty....bad.

Shadow Eevee
10-28-2007, 07:27 PM
i will make sure for that in next issh

this comic is gonna be big

Um, why won't you do it for that issue as well?