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Golden-Silver
10-31-2007, 06:05 AM
a trainer placed in kanto for new trainers or co-ordinators who are trying to improve in there abilities who have three pokemon each but can catch more later in ther term

cover (http://img152.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comiccoverra4.png)
(credit to cune for imrwoving it)

(this is my comic i will stick too okay)

issue's


http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee146/pokemon-spriter/proluge1.jpg





bio's
http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee146/pokemon-spriter/goldsprite.jpg
Name:Rai Golden
Age:12
Pokemon: Chimchar, turtwig, Riolu
personality:is the class clown in any class everyone likes him and he likes girls alot
Intrest:battling
homeland:sinnoh

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Name:Jay Bremerald
Age:11
Pokemon:slowpoke, Mudkip, Pidgey
personality:a lazy kid who loves to eat he also enjoys swimming
interest:breeding
Homeland:hoenn

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Name:Emily cune
Age:13
Pokemon: ponyta(maya), beautifly(Cassy, bulbasaur(flower)
personality:a freindly nice and kind girl who enjoys riding her ponyta
interest:co-ordinator
Homeland:kanto

Rivals:

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Spike Raygun
Age:12
Pokemon:growlithe, wartortle, machop
Personality:a cocky hot-headed trainer who has known Rai longer than everybody they are friends and rivals but mostly rivals that argue. they are best friends aswell
interest:battling
Homeland:sinnoh

image coming soon
honey maphire
Age:13
Pokemon:vespiquen, poliwag, chikorita
Personality:a cute girl who thinks she can get anyone she wants
interest:co-ordinator
Homeland:hoenn

image coming soon
Zane Fired
Age:11
Pokemon:pichu, bonsly, charmander
personality:a not so smart kid, who hates learning and just stares out the window thinking of pokemon
interest:breeder
homeland:kanto

Emily
10-31-2007, 06:24 AM
Good job, your grammar has improved drastically since your last comic! One thing to watch out for is the capitalization of "I." In normal words, don't capitalize it, but if you're referring to yourself, do. Also watch for the placement of commas. That aside, it was good for the first issue, but the link to the comic cover's broken. I believe that the correct link is this (http://www.i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee146/pokemon-spriter/cover1.jpg).

I could redo it for you, if you want. Maybe make it look a bit better?

Golden-Silver
10-31-2007, 06:44 AM
ok yes please that would be cool give me the link after

Emily
10-31-2007, 07:08 AM
Okay, here (http://img152.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comiccoverra4.png) it is!

DarkLugiaMaster Gir
11-01-2007, 08:58 PM
2 things,1 is this comic joinable i mean can we join,2.the pannles have cu pieces of trainers and trainers have missing parts,other tyhan that this comic straight and you tookeded my RPG idea...