Shinx22
11-15-2007, 04:22 PM
Completed!!
To Capture: Starly
Needed:5k-10k
Achieved:
Characters(no spaces)-6908
Characters(with spaces)-8440
Trying for a catch-Starly
It was the second day in the forest and as far as the young girl could see there were trees. She couldn't even see the sky through the many branches overhead.
The young trainer's name was Haruko, Haruko's hair color was a light, sky blue and her eyes were colored like the midnight sky, she was small for her age and was wearing a pink sleeveless summer dress with a white sleeveless hoodie over it. Haruko had just started her journey a week ago, traveling from Twinleaf Town to the first city she could find which had Pokemon Contests. Haruko was hoping that she would be able to find more pokemon along the way, but since the start she had only encountered one other Pokemon, a Pachirisu, but her own Pokemon, which was also her only Pokemon, a female Shinx, had been unable to beat the stronger electric Pokemon and so she had failed to catch the first Pokemon she encountered. Haruko's Shinx was just like any other female Shinx, the tuff of fur on its head was shorter than the males, and it had large round ear, its eyes were yellow, the same of which color were the insides of its ears, the front part of it's body was blue, the back part of its body was black, while the tip of its tail was in the shape of a four pointed star and was yellow. The rest of the tail was black. The female Shinx was also wearing a pale yellow scarf.
Now back to the story, Haruko was trying to find her way back through the forest, in which she had helplessly gotten lost in, but everywhere she went she seemed to find herself back in the same place. Haruko gave a sigh, stopping once more to look around and see if she could find someplace that seemed familiar from the day before, of course, now everywhere seemed familiar. Haruko’s Shinx stared up at her owner with a worried look in her eyes, she wished she could’ve been a flying Pokemon because then she would have been able to help her trainer. Then when Shinx felt that she couldn’t do anything else for Haruko her sensitive ears picked up a very quiet, far-away voice of another Pokemon. —ly, —arly, Starly.
[Shin, Shinx!] Shinx said excitedly. Haruko seemed to understand what her Shinx was saying as she gave a excited squeal of delight and grabbed her Shinx in both hands before rushing off farther into the forest following the sound of the new Pokemon. —Starly, Star, Starly. The sound was getting louder and louder and now even Haruko could make out each sound the Pokemon made. It seemed that there was more than one of them, but Haruko was promising herself that this time she would catch a Pokemon, no matter how difficult it was. Suddenly, Haruko could see a light that illuminated an exit from the woods. So, not only did the Starly give Haruko a chance to catch another Pokemon, but it also helped her and her Shinx exit the dense woods. Shinx leapt from Haruko's arms as they neared the meadow, being the first one to escape from the darkness of the trees. Speeding up her steps to follow the yellow and blue Pokemon, Haruko rushed out from beneath the trees and into the meadow, the hot rays of the sun temporarily blinded Haruko and she shielded her eyes, it was only a moment before she opened them again and could see fine by squinting. Haruko could now see the outline of a flock of many Pokemon, all just on the ground gathering berries from the few trees that were scattered around the clearing. Haruko could easily see the city over the green hills, but she wasn’t thinking about that now, she was planning on catching one of these black and white Pokemon. By now Haruko's eyes had adjusted to the sunlight and see could see everything clearly. This was Haruko’s first actual encounter with a Starly so she took her pink Pokedex out of her pocket and opened it. Starly, the flying Pokemon. They flock in great numbers. Though small, they flap their wings with great power.
[Awesome!] Haruko exclaimed as she closed the Pokedex and put it back into her pocket. She knew that electric types were very strong against flying Pokemon. Knowing this, Haruko called her Shinx to her side she gave it it’s first command, [Shinx, use Thunderbolt into the center of the field.] The center of the field was where most of the Starly were so Haruko believed that even if the Starly scattered she'd be able to hit at least one. The Shinx immediately obeyed its trainer and sent out an electrifying shock that filled the meadow with an even brighter light then that which was given by the sunlight. Starly scattered everywhere, flapping their wings and screeching in surprise, the whole flock started taking to the skies, but one of them had been caught off-guard by the blast and had had its right wing shocked by the blast, thus delaying its flight. This was going to be Haruko’s target. The Starly got to it’s feet angered and face Shinx, fury could easily be seen in its large black eyes. The Starly’s peak started to glow as it made the first move, charging at Shinx. Haruko wasn’t expecting the Starly to attack so quickly, and was caught with her guard down, she didn't have time to tell her Shinx to dodge before it was hit head-on by the powerful attack, flipping backwards several times. [Shinx!] Haruko called out in fear, but the electric Pokemon hadn’t been affected to badly by the peck and hopped back onto her feet, now more energized then before.
[Alright!] Haruko exclaimed, glad that her Shinx hadn’t been harmed too much by the sudden attack. [Now, use Spark.]
Shinx leapt forward and its cheeks sparked as it used the move. The Starly seemed to have realized what was going to happen as it flew up into the sky. The spark attack missed with the simple dodge and slammed into a nearby berry tree. The Starly had now started heading downwards towards Shinx, it was moving with such immense speed that Haruko didn’t see it coming until it once more hit Shinx. Haruko gasped in surprise as the small electric Pokemon was thrown to the ground. Haruko barely had enough time to think, she had to turn the battle in her favor to try and catch this Starly. Shinx seemed to be injured just a bit by the quick attack but still managed to stand, waiting for the next command from her trainer. Haruko didn’t have any idea what to do, but then, she finally thought of something that could turn the battle to her favor. The flying Pokemon had took back to the skies while Haruko was thinking and was now coming back down with a peck, Haruko thought fast giving her Pokemon its next command, [Now, Shinx, dodge it and use bite.]
Shinx spook its name in reply as it dodge out of the way, just as the Starly was about to strike, then spinning on her hind legs, Shinx jumped at Starly’s exposed stomach, clamping down hard with her sharp teeth. The Starly screeched in pain and surprise as it crashed into the ground. Shinx lost its grip as the Starly crashed into the ground and fell back, taking a clump of feather in her jaws. Haruko was for sure that the Starly would have fainted after crashing into the ground, but the black flying Pokemon managed to keep itself together and leapt back into the sky, but even Haruko could see that the Starly had been badly injured by the crash. When Haruko looked up to see what Starly was planning now, she saw that its wings were being flapped fiercely, the Starly seemed to be attempting a escape, but Haruko wasn't about to let this weakened Pokemon escape from her grasp after she had come so close to catching it.
[Don't let it get away!] The young trainer called out to her own Pokemon, [Let's try Spark one more time!] Once again Shinx's cheeks let out sparks of electricity as it let out a weak, but effective attack at the Starly. The Starly was hit from behind and feathers scattered the ground as it became off-balanced, gravity then took it's toll and the Starly crashed back down to earth, landing in the scattered pile of feathers. It lay there for a second and Haruko quickly realized that the Starly was unconscious. Haruko didn't waste any time at all as she grabbed the red and white capsule from her belt and threw it at the Starly, sailing through the air the pokeball hit the Starly on it's side and the Pokemon was engulfed by a white light before being contained in the ball. As the capsule shook violently both Haruko and her small electric Pokemon waited to see what the results would be. If the catch was successful, the young girl would finally have her second Pokemon. The ball shook once, twice, three times. What would the results be?
Completed
My very first complete pokemon story ever. Hope it's good.
To Capture: Starly
Needed:5k-10k
Achieved:
Characters(no spaces)-6908
Characters(with spaces)-8440
Trying for a catch-Starly
It was the second day in the forest and as far as the young girl could see there were trees. She couldn't even see the sky through the many branches overhead.
The young trainer's name was Haruko, Haruko's hair color was a light, sky blue and her eyes were colored like the midnight sky, she was small for her age and was wearing a pink sleeveless summer dress with a white sleeveless hoodie over it. Haruko had just started her journey a week ago, traveling from Twinleaf Town to the first city she could find which had Pokemon Contests. Haruko was hoping that she would be able to find more pokemon along the way, but since the start she had only encountered one other Pokemon, a Pachirisu, but her own Pokemon, which was also her only Pokemon, a female Shinx, had been unable to beat the stronger electric Pokemon and so she had failed to catch the first Pokemon she encountered. Haruko's Shinx was just like any other female Shinx, the tuff of fur on its head was shorter than the males, and it had large round ear, its eyes were yellow, the same of which color were the insides of its ears, the front part of it's body was blue, the back part of its body was black, while the tip of its tail was in the shape of a four pointed star and was yellow. The rest of the tail was black. The female Shinx was also wearing a pale yellow scarf.
Now back to the story, Haruko was trying to find her way back through the forest, in which she had helplessly gotten lost in, but everywhere she went she seemed to find herself back in the same place. Haruko gave a sigh, stopping once more to look around and see if she could find someplace that seemed familiar from the day before, of course, now everywhere seemed familiar. Haruko’s Shinx stared up at her owner with a worried look in her eyes, she wished she could’ve been a flying Pokemon because then she would have been able to help her trainer. Then when Shinx felt that she couldn’t do anything else for Haruko her sensitive ears picked up a very quiet, far-away voice of another Pokemon. —ly, —arly, Starly.
[Shin, Shinx!] Shinx said excitedly. Haruko seemed to understand what her Shinx was saying as she gave a excited squeal of delight and grabbed her Shinx in both hands before rushing off farther into the forest following the sound of the new Pokemon. —Starly, Star, Starly. The sound was getting louder and louder and now even Haruko could make out each sound the Pokemon made. It seemed that there was more than one of them, but Haruko was promising herself that this time she would catch a Pokemon, no matter how difficult it was. Suddenly, Haruko could see a light that illuminated an exit from the woods. So, not only did the Starly give Haruko a chance to catch another Pokemon, but it also helped her and her Shinx exit the dense woods. Shinx leapt from Haruko's arms as they neared the meadow, being the first one to escape from the darkness of the trees. Speeding up her steps to follow the yellow and blue Pokemon, Haruko rushed out from beneath the trees and into the meadow, the hot rays of the sun temporarily blinded Haruko and she shielded her eyes, it was only a moment before she opened them again and could see fine by squinting. Haruko could now see the outline of a flock of many Pokemon, all just on the ground gathering berries from the few trees that were scattered around the clearing. Haruko could easily see the city over the green hills, but she wasn’t thinking about that now, she was planning on catching one of these black and white Pokemon. By now Haruko's eyes had adjusted to the sunlight and see could see everything clearly. This was Haruko’s first actual encounter with a Starly so she took her pink Pokedex out of her pocket and opened it. Starly, the flying Pokemon. They flock in great numbers. Though small, they flap their wings with great power.
[Awesome!] Haruko exclaimed as she closed the Pokedex and put it back into her pocket. She knew that electric types were very strong against flying Pokemon. Knowing this, Haruko called her Shinx to her side she gave it it’s first command, [Shinx, use Thunderbolt into the center of the field.] The center of the field was where most of the Starly were so Haruko believed that even if the Starly scattered she'd be able to hit at least one. The Shinx immediately obeyed its trainer and sent out an electrifying shock that filled the meadow with an even brighter light then that which was given by the sunlight. Starly scattered everywhere, flapping their wings and screeching in surprise, the whole flock started taking to the skies, but one of them had been caught off-guard by the blast and had had its right wing shocked by the blast, thus delaying its flight. This was going to be Haruko’s target. The Starly got to it’s feet angered and face Shinx, fury could easily be seen in its large black eyes. The Starly’s peak started to glow as it made the first move, charging at Shinx. Haruko wasn’t expecting the Starly to attack so quickly, and was caught with her guard down, she didn't have time to tell her Shinx to dodge before it was hit head-on by the powerful attack, flipping backwards several times. [Shinx!] Haruko called out in fear, but the electric Pokemon hadn’t been affected to badly by the peck and hopped back onto her feet, now more energized then before.
[Alright!] Haruko exclaimed, glad that her Shinx hadn’t been harmed too much by the sudden attack. [Now, use Spark.]
Shinx leapt forward and its cheeks sparked as it used the move. The Starly seemed to have realized what was going to happen as it flew up into the sky. The spark attack missed with the simple dodge and slammed into a nearby berry tree. The Starly had now started heading downwards towards Shinx, it was moving with such immense speed that Haruko didn’t see it coming until it once more hit Shinx. Haruko gasped in surprise as the small electric Pokemon was thrown to the ground. Haruko barely had enough time to think, she had to turn the battle in her favor to try and catch this Starly. Shinx seemed to be injured just a bit by the quick attack but still managed to stand, waiting for the next command from her trainer. Haruko didn’t have any idea what to do, but then, she finally thought of something that could turn the battle to her favor. The flying Pokemon had took back to the skies while Haruko was thinking and was now coming back down with a peck, Haruko thought fast giving her Pokemon its next command, [Now, Shinx, dodge it and use bite.]
Shinx spook its name in reply as it dodge out of the way, just as the Starly was about to strike, then spinning on her hind legs, Shinx jumped at Starly’s exposed stomach, clamping down hard with her sharp teeth. The Starly screeched in pain and surprise as it crashed into the ground. Shinx lost its grip as the Starly crashed into the ground and fell back, taking a clump of feather in her jaws. Haruko was for sure that the Starly would have fainted after crashing into the ground, but the black flying Pokemon managed to keep itself together and leapt back into the sky, but even Haruko could see that the Starly had been badly injured by the crash. When Haruko looked up to see what Starly was planning now, she saw that its wings were being flapped fiercely, the Starly seemed to be attempting a escape, but Haruko wasn't about to let this weakened Pokemon escape from her grasp after she had come so close to catching it.
[Don't let it get away!] The young trainer called out to her own Pokemon, [Let's try Spark one more time!] Once again Shinx's cheeks let out sparks of electricity as it let out a weak, but effective attack at the Starly. The Starly was hit from behind and feathers scattered the ground as it became off-balanced, gravity then took it's toll and the Starly crashed back down to earth, landing in the scattered pile of feathers. It lay there for a second and Haruko quickly realized that the Starly was unconscious. Haruko didn't waste any time at all as she grabbed the red and white capsule from her belt and threw it at the Starly, sailing through the air the pokeball hit the Starly on it's side and the Pokemon was engulfed by a white light before being contained in the ball. As the capsule shook violently both Haruko and her small electric Pokemon waited to see what the results would be. If the catch was successful, the young girl would finally have her second Pokemon. The ball shook once, twice, three times. What would the results be?
Completed
My very first complete pokemon story ever. Hope it's good.