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Deathspector
04-03-2005, 01:36 PM
Author's note: Please do not crtisize me too much, even if my story isn't good, because this is the first time I'm writing a story.

Chapter One

I openned the Cinnabar Research Lab door, feeling cool A/C blast into my face.
Well, I might as well give you some background information about me. My name is Lance Ketchum. I'm the son of the legendary Ash Ketchum. I have the same type of hair (except longer). I have six pokemon.

A Charizard: A dragon look-a-like. It's a fire type pokemon. Two biggish wings, and a tail that has fire sprout from it.

An Archanine: A dog looking pokemon. It's red with black stripes along it. It has really sharp teeth and sharp claws.

A Dragonite: An actual dragon pokemon. Really rar, it is orange and can fly faster than any ordinary pokemon

A Scyther: A bug pokemon that has two scythes instead of arms, and it is extremely fast. It has a menacing look on it's face.

Raichu: An electric pokemon that looks like a mouse. It's tail is long, and shaped like a thunderbolt.

Golduck: This water pokemon has a beak, and looks like a duck on two feet. It also has psychic attacks.

Well, those are my pokemon.

C ontinued

Ikazuchi
04-04-2005, 03:28 PM
Just like to point out a couple of things:

1) This is in the wrong board (Should be in Pokémon FanFictions)
2) Its too short to really judge at the mo.