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DragonDarkness
02-16-2008, 10:29 PM
Looking for Constructive Criticism on my most current team. =/

Name: Togekiss
Lvl: 56
Item: Leftovers
Nature: Docile
Ability: Serene Grace
HP: 184
Def: 112
Sp. Atk: 184
Sp. Def: 148
Spd: 115
EVs: Don't Remember
Moves:
- Aura Sphere
- Air Slash
- Thunder Wave
- Double Team

Name: Electivire
Lvl:56
Item: Expert Belt
Nature: Adamant
Ability: Motor Drive
HP: 155
Atk: 214
Def:
Sp. Atk: 107
Sp. Def: 105
Spd: 156
EVs: 252 atk, 252 def, 2HP (Or def... Don't remember...)
Moves:
- Earthquake
- Cross Chop
- Thunder Punch
- Ice Punch

Name: Lucario
Lvl:56
Item: Wise Glasses
Nature: Modest
Ability: Steadfast
HP: 150
Atk: 123
Def: 99
Sp. Atk: 195
Sp. Def: 96
Spd:145
EVs: 252 sp atk, 252 spd, 4 HP
Moves:
- Aura Sphere
- Dragon Pulse
- Psychic
- Dark Pulse

Name: Blissey
Lvl:56
Item: Leftovers
Nature: Bold
Ability: Natural Cure
HP: 403
Atk: 27
Def: 74
Sp. Atk: 106
Sp. Def: 173
Spd: 83
EVs: 252 HP, 252 def, 4 Sp Atk
Moves:
- Ice Beam
- Aromatherapy
- Counter
-Soft Boiled

Name: Tyranitar
Lvl:56
Item: Shell Bell
Nature: Adamant
Ability: Sand Stream
HP: 207
Atk: 205
Def: 135
Sp. Atk: 106
Sp. Def: 126
Spd: 108
EVs: 220 atk, 180 spd, 108 HP (I think)
Moves:
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge
- Crunch
- Dragon Dance

Name: Garchomp
Lvl:56
Item: Leftovers
Nature: Quirky
Ability: Sand Veil
HP: 193
Atk: 195
Def: 117
Sp. Atk: 94
Sp. Def: 106
Spd: 171
EVs: 252 atk, 252 spd, 4 def
Moves:
- Earthquake
- Dragon Claw
- Brick Break
- Fire Fang

Spongebob Number One Fan
02-16-2008, 11:42 PM
Clean up that format so that it's readable. Take out the stats and levels as they're irrelevant.

Just a few things to note thoguh...Double team and evasion moves are banned. Also nuetral nature should be avoided at pretty much all costs.

BTW STAB Earthquake from Garchomp does as muhc as supereffective Brick Break so Brick Break isn't needed.

PokemonBoy2106
02-17-2008, 12:56 AM
Looking for Constructive Criticism on my most current team. =/

Name: Togekiss
Lvl: 56
Item: Leftovers
Nature: Docile
Ability: Serene Grace
HP: 184
Def: 112
Sp. Atk: 184
Sp. Def: 148
Spd: 115
EVs: Don't Remember
Moves:
- Aura Sphere
- Air Slash
- Thunder Wave
- Double Team

Name: Electivire
Lvl:56
Item: Expert Belt
Nature: Adamant
Ability: Motor Drive
HP: 155
Atk: 214
Def:
Sp. Atk: 107
Sp. Def: 105
Spd: 156
EVs: 252 atk, 252 def, 2HP (Or def... Don't remember...)
Moves:
- Earthquake
- Cross Chop
- Thunder Punch
- Ice Punch

Name: Lucario
Lvl:56
Item: Wise Glasses
Nature: Modest
Ability: Steadfast
HP: 150
Atk: 123
Def: 99
Sp. Atk: 195
Sp. Def: 96
Spd:145
EVs: 252 sp atk, 252 spd, 4 HP
Moves:
- Aura Sphere
- Dragon Pulse
- Psychic
- Dark Pulse

Name: Blissey
Lvl:56
Item: Leftovers
Nature: Bold
Ability: Natural Cure
HP: 403
Atk: 27
Def: 74
Sp. Atk: 106
Sp. Def: 173
Spd: 83
EVs: 252 HP, 252 def, 4 Sp Atk
Moves:
- Ice Beam
- Aromatherapy
- Counter
-Soft Boiled

Name: Tyranitar
Lvl:56
Item: Shell Bell
Nature: Adamant
Ability: Sand Stream
HP: 207
Atk: 205
Def: 135
Sp. Atk: 106
Sp. Def: 126
Spd: 108
EVs: 220 atk, 180 spd, 108 HP (I think)
Moves:
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge
- Crunch
- Dragon Dance

Name: Garchomp
Lvl:56
Item: Leftovers
Nature: Quirky
Ability: Sand Veil
HP: 193
Atk: 195
Def: 117
Sp. Atk: 94
Sp. Def: 106
Spd: 171
EVs: 252 atk, 252 spd, 4 def
Moves:
- Earthquake
- Dragon Claw
- Brick Break
- Fire Fang


I understand I'm in no position to tell you what to do considering my team is disgraceful but I'd cut either Garchomp or Tyranitar.

Itachi_2007
02-17-2008, 02:12 PM
Roost over DT on Togekiss, where are the EVs? The movesets are great, just make sure you give Electrivire 252 ATK / 252 SPD / 4 HP. I'd edit out the format, though. Give Tyranitar something like these:

Tyranitar @ Leftovers / Life Orb ** Bigfoot
Trait: Sandstream
EVs: 216 ATK / 160 SPD / 124 HP
Adamant Nature (+ATK,- SATK)
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge
- Pursuit / Taunt. I'd definitely give Tyranitar Taunt in this set so you don't have to wary of Skarm.

OR

Tyranitar @ Choice Band ** Bigfoot / Falcon -- Punch!
Trait: Sandstream
EVs: 252 ATK / 196 SPD / 52 HP
Adamant Nature (+ATK, -SATK)
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge
- Pursuit / Crucnh
- Focus Punch / Dragon Claw / Brick Break / Aerial Ace.

OR

Tyranitar @ Leftovers ** Falcon -- Punch!
Trait: Sandstream
EVs: 252 HP / 196 SATk / 52 SPD
Quiet Nature (+SATk, -SPD)
- Substitute
- Focus Punch
- Dark Pulse / Crunch
- Thunderbolt / Ice Beam. Oh yeah, give Togekiss, A.K.A Flinchkiss, Calm / Modest / Bold Nature.