Nevermore Wolf
03-07-2008, 05:16 AM
Naruto: Chasm of Secrets
~Intro Theme~ (“http://boomp3.com/m/d04b3b036066/simple-plan-me-against-the-world”)
We're not gonna be
Just apart of their game
We're not gonna be
Just the victims
They're taking our dreams
And they tear them apart
'til everyone's the same
I've got no place to go
I've got no where to run
They love to watch me fall
They think they know it all
I'm a nightmare, a disaster
That's what they always said
I'm a lost cause, not a hero
But I'll make it on my own
I've gotta prove them wrong
Me against the world
It's me against the world
We won't let them change
How we feel in our hearts
We're not gonna let them control us
We won't let them shove
All their thoughts in our heads
And we'll never be like them
I've got no place to go
I've got no where to run
They love to watch me fall
They think they know it all
I'm a nightmare, a disaster
That's what they always said
I'm a lost cause, not a hero
But I'll make it on my own
I'm gonna prove them wrong
It's me against the world
Me against the world
Now I'm sick of this waiting
So come on and take your shot
You can spit all your insults
But nothing you say is gonna change us
You can sit there and judge me
Say what you want to
We'll never let you in
I'm a nightmare, a disaster
That's what they always said
I'm a lost cause, not a hero
But I'll make it on my own
Me against the world
I'm a nightmare, a disaster
That's what they always said
I'm a lost cause, not a hero
But I'll make it on my own
I've got to prove them wrong
They'll never bring us down
We'll never fall in line
I'll make it on my own
Me against the world
Now that that’s over with, allow me to introduce the ACTUAL story. Beware, it will be mildly tuned down but that doesn’t mean that it won’t be violent, bloody, and do a bit of cussing.
-About COS-
COS was a Naruto Fanfic I wrote a while ago, it was a long and exciting write and read and I’m re-writing it to go on PE2K. Yup, the WHOLE story will be re-written and re-done, mainly because of how much I would have had to edit if I had simply used the old version, plus I can add different characters and improve the story. So, PM me for details. I’ve got a tracker program, so if you want that, PM me and you’ll get the occasional update PM plus some stuff that hasn’t started yet, new themes and such. My few on Watch can submit a character. One per person, please. I’m not changing it that much, so be prepared to not see many characters become major. Just say their details, past, heritage, personality, ECT.
-Plot-
After a twenty year absence, the Akatsuki has returned and a Chasm has opened somewhere in the desert that leads to the world or the Tailed Beasts. Somehow, the great Eared beasts have risen and been sealed like their brothers, the Tailed beasts.
Now with the Chuunin exams going on everyone is tense and no one knows what might become of it. Sanya, Anire, and Torei are all ready as any Genin, but Sanya feels different. She has finally realized there’s something wrong with her. Why everyone has been afraid of her all these lonely years where her only friends had been her cousins. She sees herself as a monster, and secretly fears herself inside.
Meanwhile, Anira struggles to fit in with the new Akatsuki as she always has, until one day the Akatsuki leader discovers her secret. She has the Sharingan. No one knows how it happened or why but she does and now the Akatsuki leader is trying to discover her past and she is under more stress than ever now that the whole Akatsuki has laid their expectations on her for some strange reason.
What will happen?
--------------------------
Prologue
-Sanya-
Sanya stood, paralyzed on the spot, staring at the floor beneath her feet. It just came too soon. She couldn’t believe it. The reason she had suffered all of the pain in her life, the reason everyone ran when she came near. The reason Anire had told her that she would always be feared.
“It’s true.” Said Torei, still standing on the lonely road through the Sand Village beneath the stars that shone so brightly in the night sky.
“No…” she said, looking up and stepping away slightly, fear gripping her.
“And why not?” Torei said, “You always have been, always will. No denying it, that’s the reason for ya, and it’s the truth.”
“But… You… Why didn’t I know this earlier?” she said, standing up to her older cousin.
“They didn’t want you to know that you remain a failure even when you’re feared. You’ve always been a lost cause.” He said, “Admit it, you’ve always been one.”
“No, Torei.” She said, looking up and brushing her blonde hair back behind her head, “I…I can’t believe you.”
“Then you must be stupid.” He said, staring into Sanya’s brown eyes, “I can tell you I didn’t expect much more.”
Sanya didn’t reply this time, and she wasn’t honestly listening to her oldest cousin as she stepped back a few paces, then ran.
Sanya felt that she didn’t exist anymore, like she was the wind, racing over the hills, blowing up the sand. It wasn’t a nice feeling, more like she was going somewhere that she didn’t want to go, but she was being forced to go and couldn’t stop.
When she finally reached her house, she rushed inside and out the back exit to where the exit to the village was, and sat down. It wasn’t fair, it was like she had never existed to her cousin. She had never been particularly close to him, but now he seemed further than ever from her heart as she sat beneath the stars, staring up to where she always did when she was alone. A single star. The only point of light in that vast sea of darkness that seemed to be shining as bright as the sun in the daytime, it was shining brighter than all of the other stars.
I wish I was that star. She thought, I wouldn’t be a failure.
But I am a failure. I…she looked up at the star again, But that star’s probably been there thousands of years…I don’t know…
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Sorry it's so short.
~Ending Theme~ (“http://boomp3.com/m/787de94d3d63/superchick-stand-in-the-rain”)
She never slows down.
She doesn't know why but she knows that when she's all alone, feels like its all coming down
She won't turn around
The shadows are long and she fears if she cries that first tear, the tears will not stop raining down
So stand in the rain
Stand your ground
Stand up when it's all crashing down
You stand through the pain
You won't drown
And one day, what’s lost can be found
You stand in the rain
She won't make a sound
Alone in this fight with herself and the fears whispering if she stands she'll fall down
She wants to be found
The only way out is through everything she's running from wants to give up and lie down.
So stand in the rain
Stand your ground
Stand up when it's all crashing down
You stand through the pain
You won't drown
And one day, whats lost can be found
You stand in the rain
So stand in the rain
Stand your ground
Stand up when it's all crashing down
Stand through the pain
You won't drown
And one day, what’s lost can be found
So stand in the rain
Stand your ground
Stand up when it's all crashing down
You stand through the pain
You won't drown
And one day, what’s lost can be found
You stand in the rain
~Intro Theme~ (“http://boomp3.com/m/d04b3b036066/simple-plan-me-against-the-world”)
We're not gonna be
Just apart of their game
We're not gonna be
Just the victims
They're taking our dreams
And they tear them apart
'til everyone's the same
I've got no place to go
I've got no where to run
They love to watch me fall
They think they know it all
I'm a nightmare, a disaster
That's what they always said
I'm a lost cause, not a hero
But I'll make it on my own
I've gotta prove them wrong
Me against the world
It's me against the world
We won't let them change
How we feel in our hearts
We're not gonna let them control us
We won't let them shove
All their thoughts in our heads
And we'll never be like them
I've got no place to go
I've got no where to run
They love to watch me fall
They think they know it all
I'm a nightmare, a disaster
That's what they always said
I'm a lost cause, not a hero
But I'll make it on my own
I'm gonna prove them wrong
It's me against the world
Me against the world
Now I'm sick of this waiting
So come on and take your shot
You can spit all your insults
But nothing you say is gonna change us
You can sit there and judge me
Say what you want to
We'll never let you in
I'm a nightmare, a disaster
That's what they always said
I'm a lost cause, not a hero
But I'll make it on my own
Me against the world
I'm a nightmare, a disaster
That's what they always said
I'm a lost cause, not a hero
But I'll make it on my own
I've got to prove them wrong
They'll never bring us down
We'll never fall in line
I'll make it on my own
Me against the world
Now that that’s over with, allow me to introduce the ACTUAL story. Beware, it will be mildly tuned down but that doesn’t mean that it won’t be violent, bloody, and do a bit of cussing.
-About COS-
COS was a Naruto Fanfic I wrote a while ago, it was a long and exciting write and read and I’m re-writing it to go on PE2K. Yup, the WHOLE story will be re-written and re-done, mainly because of how much I would have had to edit if I had simply used the old version, plus I can add different characters and improve the story. So, PM me for details. I’ve got a tracker program, so if you want that, PM me and you’ll get the occasional update PM plus some stuff that hasn’t started yet, new themes and such. My few on Watch can submit a character. One per person, please. I’m not changing it that much, so be prepared to not see many characters become major. Just say their details, past, heritage, personality, ECT.
-Plot-
After a twenty year absence, the Akatsuki has returned and a Chasm has opened somewhere in the desert that leads to the world or the Tailed Beasts. Somehow, the great Eared beasts have risen and been sealed like their brothers, the Tailed beasts.
Now with the Chuunin exams going on everyone is tense and no one knows what might become of it. Sanya, Anire, and Torei are all ready as any Genin, but Sanya feels different. She has finally realized there’s something wrong with her. Why everyone has been afraid of her all these lonely years where her only friends had been her cousins. She sees herself as a monster, and secretly fears herself inside.
Meanwhile, Anira struggles to fit in with the new Akatsuki as she always has, until one day the Akatsuki leader discovers her secret. She has the Sharingan. No one knows how it happened or why but she does and now the Akatsuki leader is trying to discover her past and she is under more stress than ever now that the whole Akatsuki has laid their expectations on her for some strange reason.
What will happen?
--------------------------
Prologue
-Sanya-
Sanya stood, paralyzed on the spot, staring at the floor beneath her feet. It just came too soon. She couldn’t believe it. The reason she had suffered all of the pain in her life, the reason everyone ran when she came near. The reason Anire had told her that she would always be feared.
“It’s true.” Said Torei, still standing on the lonely road through the Sand Village beneath the stars that shone so brightly in the night sky.
“No…” she said, looking up and stepping away slightly, fear gripping her.
“And why not?” Torei said, “You always have been, always will. No denying it, that’s the reason for ya, and it’s the truth.”
“But… You… Why didn’t I know this earlier?” she said, standing up to her older cousin.
“They didn’t want you to know that you remain a failure even when you’re feared. You’ve always been a lost cause.” He said, “Admit it, you’ve always been one.”
“No, Torei.” She said, looking up and brushing her blonde hair back behind her head, “I…I can’t believe you.”
“Then you must be stupid.” He said, staring into Sanya’s brown eyes, “I can tell you I didn’t expect much more.”
Sanya didn’t reply this time, and she wasn’t honestly listening to her oldest cousin as she stepped back a few paces, then ran.
Sanya felt that she didn’t exist anymore, like she was the wind, racing over the hills, blowing up the sand. It wasn’t a nice feeling, more like she was going somewhere that she didn’t want to go, but she was being forced to go and couldn’t stop.
When she finally reached her house, she rushed inside and out the back exit to where the exit to the village was, and sat down. It wasn’t fair, it was like she had never existed to her cousin. She had never been particularly close to him, but now he seemed further than ever from her heart as she sat beneath the stars, staring up to where she always did when she was alone. A single star. The only point of light in that vast sea of darkness that seemed to be shining as bright as the sun in the daytime, it was shining brighter than all of the other stars.
I wish I was that star. She thought, I wouldn’t be a failure.
But I am a failure. I…she looked up at the star again, But that star’s probably been there thousands of years…I don’t know…
-----------------------------
Sorry it's so short.
~Ending Theme~ (“http://boomp3.com/m/787de94d3d63/superchick-stand-in-the-rain”)
She never slows down.
She doesn't know why but she knows that when she's all alone, feels like its all coming down
She won't turn around
The shadows are long and she fears if she cries that first tear, the tears will not stop raining down
So stand in the rain
Stand your ground
Stand up when it's all crashing down
You stand through the pain
You won't drown
And one day, what’s lost can be found
You stand in the rain
She won't make a sound
Alone in this fight with herself and the fears whispering if she stands she'll fall down
She wants to be found
The only way out is through everything she's running from wants to give up and lie down.
So stand in the rain
Stand your ground
Stand up when it's all crashing down
You stand through the pain
You won't drown
And one day, whats lost can be found
You stand in the rain
So stand in the rain
Stand your ground
Stand up when it's all crashing down
Stand through the pain
You won't drown
And one day, what’s lost can be found
So stand in the rain
Stand your ground
Stand up when it's all crashing down
You stand through the pain
You won't drown
And one day, what’s lost can be found
You stand in the rain