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Groudon_fan
04-04-2008, 03:23 AM
YES! It's Baaaack!

The Kirbymon comic!

With Kirbymon!

Episodes:

Episode 1! not interesting! (http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h143/WL_5/kcom1.png)
Ep. 2! Badly drawn attacks! (http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h143/WL_5/kcom2-1.png)
Episode 3! THEY ARE EVIL! (http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h143/WL_5/kcom3.png)

Guest stars welcome!

Kendo
04-05-2008, 07:08 PM
Do you mind if I give you some constructive criticism?

This really needs to be clearer. For example, in the first issue, Umbri is in the forest, then one panel later he's suddenly in the clouds! And your third episode hardly makes any sense at all. What was the cowboy guy (or whatever it was) pic there for? He could have just used a Roundhouse Kick or something. Well, that's what I think. And I think you need a form for guest stars to apply.

iChaos
04-05-2008, 09:10 PM
Do you mind if I give you some constructive criticism?

This really needs to be clearer. For example, in the first issue, Umbri is in the forest, then one panel later he's suddenly in the clouds! And your third episode hardly makes any sense at all. What was the cowboy guy (or whatever it was) pic there for? He could have just used a Roundhouse Kick or something. Well, that's what I think. And I think you need a form for guest stars to apply.
At the last sentence here's one thing, he dosen't have to have guess stars if he don't want. Great comic though, GF!

Graceful_Suicune
04-05-2008, 09:58 PM
I like your Kirbymon! The comic episodes are a bit short, though, espesially the first one. Well put together but you only have 3 episodes =/ Its probably hard to do, though.