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goldmewtwo
04-18-2008, 12:42 PM
http://i27.tinypic.com/34hfgvr.jpg after aplane crach you wake up in jade town pokemon center the nurse says im so sorry only on made it thats when you pick your starter after that a huge earthquake destorys the poke center you see a large dragon fly away you get a call from you mom shes at the nearest port.........after pr grove and her give you the pokedex she says we have a house in jade city come visit and thats a start

goldmewtwo
04-18-2008, 12:48 PM
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ragnarok0422
04-18-2008, 12:56 PM
I think that you should know better... do not be offended but you need to have a bigger plot than that... Why? Because:

Short Plot = Less Attraction
Adequate Plot = Adequate Attraction
Adequate Plot WITH something interesting = BIG attraction

...try to remember that... 'kay?

Good luck on your region! If this improves, I may even lend you some of my scratches... ask some members here if you want to know how good are my scratches are... ^_^

Kroko_Boy
04-18-2008, 03:22 PM
I agree with ragnajacob. I would've made a bigger plot but good luck! :D