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xXPrimalDialgaXx
05-08-2008, 11:44 PM
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/6306/pokemonmysterydungeontequ2.png (http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?p=2204506#post2204506)
Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Team March's Quest

I WILL ONLY UPDATE ON WEEKENDS!

Plot:
Wichu, the leader of Team March has been having weird dreams lately. One day, he finds a Skitty named Katy outside he's house looking for some "Ratbulb". For her surprise, Wichu is actually this "Ratbulb" and greets her for joining Team March. She and Wichu leave to prepare for their adventures. Later, a Shuppet and three shadows appear at Wichu's house, what is their plan?

Issues:
A Strange Day (http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/6108/pokemonmysterydungeontetf9.png)
Commotion in Square (http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/9858/pokemonmysterydungeontera7.png)

xXPrimalDialgaXx
05-09-2008, 02:03 AM
Reserved

xXPrimalDialgaXx
05-09-2008, 01:01 PM
People you can start posting!

~temporal

Graceful_Suicune
05-10-2008, 01:14 AM
Cool as comic! I like the plot, and you made a good use of the different Pokemon. Heh: "Yes, your shadiness." Lol that was funny. And how Katy was dreaming of hunky Persian! Nice work! :biggrin: Are you accepting guest stars?

xXPrimalDialgaXx
05-10-2008, 01:19 AM
Cool as comic! I like the plot, and you made a good use of the different Pokemon. Heh: "Yes, your shadiness." Lol that was funny. And how Katy was dreaming of hunky Persian! Nice work! :biggrin: Are you accepting guest stars?

Let me think for a moment... I might make a special exception. But, just get me the pkmn you wanna be. Either post the spritesheet or the link to it. I might make it evil or good.
Thanks for comment!

~temporal

PapaLuLu27
05-10-2008, 01:25 AM
Awesome Comic, I really like how Shuppet can transform.

Graceful_Suicune
05-10-2008, 01:30 AM
Let me think for a moment... I might make a special exception. But, just get me the pkmn you wanna be. Either post the spritesheet or the link to it. I might make it evil or good.
Thanks for comment!

~temporal

Sure! I am happy to give you feedback! And yes, I will give you the sprites, ripped by myself!
Character: Eevee
Gender: Female
Name: Delta
Sprites: EDIT: Here they are! ^^ http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll34/goldflareon/EeveeRips-1.png
Personality: If good: Cheerful, and loves to run and bounce around, but whines all the time. If evil: Is weird and mentions things about banana milkshakes, but is a good leader, although not mean enough.
Hope you accept her! :biggrin: And thanks for making an exception!

xXPrimalDialgaXx
05-10-2008, 01:31 AM
Awesome Comic, I really like how Shuppet can transform.

Thanks for a comment. Im starting at these comic thing. Anyways, Shuppet has the ability to transform into pkmn that stare at he's eyes, I might make an issue where he kidnaps Kecleon and stares at him and makes him crazy and leave making him transform into him.

Sure! I am happy to give you feedback! And yes, I will give you the sprites, ripped by myself!
Character: Eevee
Gender: Female
Name: Delta
Sprites: ~Will give to you as soon as I can~
Personality: If good: Cheerful, and loves to run and bounce around, but whines all the time. If evil: Is weird and mentions things about banana milkshakes, but is a good leader, although not mean enough.
Hope you accept her! :biggrin: And thanks for making an exception!

Ok! Just be quick if you wanna be in tommorrows issue.


~temporal

Chrispy
05-10-2008, 01:58 AM
Hmm I only read the first issue but it seems like you have this comic making thing under control. There were some things I suggest you work on though. First would be the quality of your comics and how well the storyline fits into it. Don't worry if you can't get everything you want on one sheet just make it continue. In the first issue it kind of seems like you skipped to make sure you had enough room because I don't think you would wake up and then automatically have joined the team. Make more complex dialogue between the characters and you should try and add some comedy that'll appeal to the elder members here on PE2K.

Now onto my guest star.. or possibly a reoccuring character? I wanna be the famous rescue team (kind of like Alakazam's team in the mystery dugeon series.)

Character: Chimchar, Persian, Cubone
Gender: Male, Female, Male
Name: Striker, Gem, Bones
Sprites: http://www.spriters-resource.com/nintendo/pokemon/pkmndung/ <any sprite you need is there
Personality: Gem is similiar to Alakazam, hightly intelligent and the leader of the team. Chimchar is like Charizard, talks alot which usually gets him embarassed. Bones resembles Tyranitar, doesn't talk much and is extremely powerful.

(If you need help with those characters or your comic in general you can always PM me. I have done several issues of my own sprite comic over the past years which is a little too graphic for this forum, but I have experience and many ideas.)

xXPrimalDialgaXx
05-10-2008, 02:31 AM
Hmm I only read the first issue but it seems like you have this comic making thing under control. There were some things I suggest you work on though. First would be the quality of your comics and how well the storyline fits into it. Don't worry if you can't get everything you want on one sheet just make it continue. In the first issue it kind of seems like you skipped to make sure you had enough room because I don't think you would wake up and then automatically have joined the team. Make more complex dialogue between the characters and you should try and add some comedy that'll appeal to the elder members here on PE2K.

Now onto my guest star.. or possibly a reoccuring character? I wanna be the famous rescue team (kind of like Alakazam's team in the mystery dugeon series.)

Character: Chimchar, Persian, Cubone
Gender: Male, Female, Male
Name: Striker, Gem, Bones
Sprites: http://www.spriters-resource.com/nintendo/pokemon/pkmndung/ <any sprite you need is there
Personality: Gem is similiar to Alakazam, hightly intelligent and the leader of the team. Chimchar is like Charizard, talks alot which usually gets him embarassed. Bones resembles Tyranitar, doesn't talk much and is extremely powerful.

(If you need help with those characters or your comic in general you can always PM me. I have done several issues of my own sprite comic over the past years which is a little too graphic for this forum, but I have experience and many ideas.)

Of those three, I select Chimchar as a guess star, you will be with Graceful_Suicune's Evee Delta, forming a team.

~temporal