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Lil_Santito
05-15-2005, 12:37 PM
Here's one of my very first Pokemon Pic I have drawn on tha computer (I am not lying) :
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v731/Lil_Santito/Blaziken.png (http://pokemonfantasy.freespaces.com/)
Please rate from 1-10 and post any comments or advice or anything below.

Matt
05-15-2005, 01:27 PM
I give it a 4. It's a little out of proportion and lacks proper shading.

jynx
05-15-2005, 05:27 PM
Here's one of my very first Pokemon Pic I have drawn on tha computer (I am not lying) :
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v731/Lil_Santito/Blaziken.png (http://pokemonfantasy.freespaces.com/)
Please rate from 1-10 and post any comments or advice or anything below.
That's good for a 1st attempt.

To improve, add more shading. Add explosures.

Zenaku
05-15-2005, 10:34 PM
Hm... Well... I'd say about a 4 or 5.

It lacks some shading in some areas, with a few shaded areas not showing the illusion of light. Some parts are out of proportion, although I like how you've seemingly tried an original pose, and the colours pretty much match (Most people might use those awful neon-default colours).

On thing I can suggest: Use thicker lines, and draw much, much bigger. It can help a lot when drawing Oekaki style (Oekaki is the term used for drawings in programs like Paint; keep practicing and your oekakis will improve).

sybersaur3000
05-16-2005, 05:05 PM
I vote 4 because it looks...fat :eek:

It is pretty good. If you follow what everyone else said(shading, straighter lines, etc) that blaziken would look very nice.

Jack of Clovers
05-17-2005, 06:19 AM
it's good enough. better than anything i can probably do. it looks stiff to me... maybe try shading. :confused:

~Jack~

manectrics_shockwave
05-17-2005, 06:22 AM
It's pretty good like everyone said the shading could have been better and the mouth is kind of wierd.


YAY!! I'm done with Gardevoir for VPP!!! :biggrin:

Pokemon Trainer Sarah
05-17-2005, 07:35 AM
That's excellent for your first computer picture. ^_^ The arms look really stiff, but if you fix the shading the whole thing will look better ^^

Matt
05-17-2005, 07:51 PM
Let me just point out the the fore-arm of his right arm is the same length of his entire left arm. :ermm: