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Kirby Grunt
05-12-2008, 01:13 AM
http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/PokemonPurpleVersion.png
This is a comic I made loooong ago, From comic 1, you'll see the quality go up and etc. I am still working on neetness and etc, such as frames and panels:
It has custom maps, custom characters, gym leaders, and elite fours. If anyone can supply some custom gym leaders, that would be awsome, I would greatly appreciate if you did. I only need the leader btw, I can make the gym myself. I use Advance map to make my maps, and get sprites from Spriters resource.

Drunk Duck account: http://www.drunkduck.com/Pokemon_Purple_Version/


Comic 1: http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/comicone-1.png
Comic 2: http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/Comic2.png
Comic 3 : http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/comic3.png
Comic 4: http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/comic4.png
Comic 5: http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/comic5.png
Comic 6: http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/comic6.png
Comic 7: http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/Comic7.png
Comic 8: http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/Comic8.png
Comic 9: http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/Comic9-1.png
Comic 10: http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/Comic10.png
Comic 11: http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/Comic11.png
Comic 12[NEW]: http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/Comic12.png

In the Comic the blonde is first named Ian, but with a lil talk with my Assistant(actually just my friend, he doesn't do much) his name is now Rami. Umm.. Sorry for any inconvinience?

Locations:
Route one: http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/route1.jpg
Town 1(starter town) : http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/town1.jpg
Town 2: http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/town2.jpg


Resources:
Sprite resource:The Spriter's Resource (http://www.spriters-resource.com/nintendo/pokemon/)
Other Custom sprites I(will) use: http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/requests.png
Made by:
Blood_Flood
Ragon 00
Master_of_Munch
Jogan

Other Gym leader and random trainer sprites provided by:
Galactic Grunt


Rami is kinda based off my actual friend.
Note: I am accepting Cameo's of only trainers that the characters battle against along the way. If anyone can supply some custom gym leaders, that would be awsome, I would greatly appreciate if you did.

V updated by Jogan V
http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/4898/themgz1.png


I have discontinued this comic.

Good day to you sir.

xXPrimalDialgaXx
05-12-2008, 01:27 AM
I think you started badthen impproved a lot.
The comic is getting great.
If this is one of those randomness comics, their starting ok.
If it's got a plot, stat introducing the plot.

~temporal

Kirby Grunt
05-12-2008, 01:37 AM
I think you started badthen impproved a lot.
The comic is getting great.
If this is one of those randomness comics, their starting ok.
If it's got a plot, stat introducing the plot.

~temporal

Hmmm, your right I should start making a bloody plot, any suggestions?

xXPrimalDialgaXx
05-12-2008, 01:39 AM
Hmmm, your right I should start making a plot, any suggestions?

Well, something like a pkmn used for experiments. Use Rayquaza and make it that he has a clone. Edit he's sprite and make it techno. Or I can do it.

~temporal

Kirby Grunt
05-12-2008, 01:55 AM
Well, something like a pkmn used for experiments. Use Rayquaza and make it that he has a clone. Edit he's sprite and make it techno. Or I can do it.

~temporal
I like that, but I still want it to have the theme of the games, is that alright?

xXPrimalDialgaXx
05-12-2008, 02:22 AM
I like that, but I still want it to have the theme of the games, is that alright?

Maybe that the legendary pkmn Mewtwo had an accident and some parts of he's body were turned robotic and he escaped from the lab and now has double the power he has and decides to create an army of ghost pokemons to contact the underworld and return he's old body.

~temporal

Kirby Grunt
05-12-2008, 03:52 AM
Maybe that the legendary pkmn Mewtwo had an accident and some parts of he's body were turned robotic and he escaped from the lab and now has double the power he has and decides to create an army of ghost pokemons to contact the underworld and return he's old body.

~temporal

I like the first one better. But I guess I could keep the rayquaza one and keep the theme.
Thanks a TON.

Rami CP
05-12-2008, 11:49 PM
HI! If ur reading this im zacks freind Idea maker of pokemon purple!
I dont post things, but i like to help out with this comic!
Ya like he said I dont do much.:oops:

Kirby Grunt
05-12-2008, 11:51 PM
HI! If ur reading this im zacks freind Idea maker of pokemon purple!
I dont post things, but i like to help out with this comic!
Ya like he said I dont do much.:oops:
Oh great, real great... Your here >.> Anways, not to be rude or anything, I have been the one making most, if not all, the ideas for the comic. Not you.
But yeah, you help me make the ideas though.

Rami CP
05-12-2008, 11:53 PM
Yes i am wut r u gonna do about it :razz: lol just kidding around!

Rami CP
05-12-2008, 11:59 PM
Put me down as assitant becuase i dont do much... lol Oops.. I for got no double posting lol!

Kirby Grunt
05-13-2008, 02:21 AM
Update! Added Comic 8!
I ave a question for people who actually rad this comic. xD
Do you guys enjoy it? Is it easy to understand? Is the dialouge good?

Kirby Grunt
05-14-2008, 10:38 PM
Hai, sorry for double post but added new comic:
http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/Comic9-1.png

Kirby Grunt
05-16-2008, 03:07 AM
Hai, sorry for double post but added new comic:
http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/Comic9-1.png
Update:
http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/Comic10.png

Jogan
05-17-2008, 10:54 PM
Update! Added Comic 8!
I ave a question for people who actually rad this comic. xD
Do you guys enjoy it? Is it easy to understand? Is the dialouge good?

It is hard to tell who is speaking when. In comic books the first sentence is higher in the frame. you have alot of mistakes like this

Zack: An awesome Zubat!
Rami: What pokemon did you catch?

xXPrimalDialgaXx
05-17-2008, 11:44 PM
Hy kirbster!
PLZ continue to make the comics!
The plot is getting inetresting.
I assume that a machine changes the pkmn completely an makes them only obey Team Rocket right?

~temporal

Kirby Grunt
05-18-2008, 04:12 AM
Hey guys thanks for your support ^_^
I never thought anyone else would post here >.>
Anyway, about your comment about the higher speech bubble and etc. I fixed that a long time ago, but It was sucking in the first few (1 to 3) comics, but yeah, I'll look out for that anyway.

Kirby Grunt
05-20-2008, 03:26 AM
Hey guys thanks for your support ^_^
I never thought anyone else would post here >.>
Anyway, about your comment about the higher speech bubble and etc. I fixed that a long time ago, but It was sucking in the first few (1 to 3) comics, but yeah, I'll look out for that anyway.
Sorry guys. Couldn't work on Comic today, I was testing some stuff out, and had HWK. I have extra homework this week cuz i have Friday and monday Off

Kirby Grunt
05-24-2008, 02:18 AM
Update, added comic 11!
Rami CP came over and forced me to do it!
(Don't worry tonights a perfect night for murder!)
Edit: Here is a link to a new Drunnk Duck account I made:
http://www.drunkduck.com/Pokemon_Purple_Version/

Rami CP
05-24-2008, 04:21 PM
I did not force him to do it!
I asked him if he wanted to make a comic (cuz its been like a week since he posted any thing) he said ok and we got started! But ya I think you already know hes kidding lol.

Kroko_Boy
05-24-2008, 08:48 PM
Lol, I love the last picture of Pikachu in comic 8 xD
Good job making those! :D

Kirby Grunt
05-24-2008, 10:38 PM
Finished comic 12.
This one is kinda short:
http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/Comic12.png
Cookie time
^__^

Kroko_Boy
05-24-2008, 10:48 PM
Finished comic 12.
This one is kinda short:
http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z204/ZackA_2day/Comic12.png
Cookie time
^__^

Nice! "Trust me, you don't wanna disturb zack's cookie time" xD

Kirby Grunt
05-24-2008, 10:53 PM
Nice! "Trust me, you don't wanna disturb zack's cookie time" xDYeah, and I heard you liked Pikachu's face at comic 8, here is my Art gallery for more images similiar to that:
http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?t=82698

Kroko_Boy
05-24-2008, 10:57 PM
Yeah, and I heard you liked Pikachu's face at comic 8, here is my Art gallery for more images similiar to that:
http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?t=82698

Yeah they are nice^^

Galactic Spriter
05-26-2008, 04:55 PM
NICE COMIC!! Do you still need gym leaders? I could try making some.

Kirby Grunt
05-26-2008, 09:48 PM
NICE COMIC!! Do you still need gym leaders? I could try making some.Yeah, thanks a bunch if you could.

Galactic Spriter
05-26-2008, 10:05 PM
Yeah, thanks a bunch if you could.
Uh.. gym leader with hat http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/7949/trainerwhatas3.png

Kirby Grunt
05-26-2008, 10:08 PM
Uh.. gym leader with hat http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/7949/trainerwhatas3.png
Okay, I can't think of a name, but is it a Bug type gym leader?

Galactic Spriter
05-26-2008, 10:10 PM
Okay, I can't think of a name, but is it a Bug type gym leader?
Whatever type you want. Do you want me to make more?

Rami CP
05-29-2008, 06:45 PM
Just here to tell some of u guys that I have made about three Gym leaders already (Still fixing them cuz they look retarded). So not all gyms may be accsepted. (Well maybe elite four would) onless Kirbster doesent use mine he doesent alwase like :susp:.
Well thats all. If u dont know me im Zacks asistent Idea maker/semi sprite maker of pokemon purple! (If zack says "i dont do any thing" hes half right i dont do to ALOT but i kinda help.)

Galactic Spriter
05-29-2008, 10:05 PM
Just here to tell some of u guys that I have made about three Gym leaders already (Still fixing them cuz they look retarded). So not all gyms may be accsepted. (Well maybe elite four would) onless Kirbster doesent use mine he doesent alwase like :susp:.
Well thats all. If u dont know me im Zacks asistent Idea maker/semi sprite maker of pokemon purple! (If zack says "i dont do any thing" hes half right i dont do to ALOT but i kinda help.)
Well he never answered my question: Want me to make more?

Rami CP
05-30-2008, 03:14 AM
Yes, that would be ok.
But we need other custom sprites like random trainers, Elite four, and maybe some guest aperences. We have three Gym Leaders already, since we r not that in the comic we dont need gyms for awhile. Not that it wouldent help.

Kirby Grunt
06-02-2008, 01:51 AM
Yes, that would be ok.
But we need other custom sprites like random trainers, Elite four, and maybe some guest aperences. We have three Gym Leaders already, since we r not that in the comic we dont need gyms for awhile. Not that it wouldent help.
Rami, yours are just recolors and suck beyond beliefe, no offence, also let me answer the questions for on now, becuase of you I had to turn down 2 people for guest appearences (Ali and Mitch) I said no guest stars, unless I request them, but Mitch may still be in it[Rami]. and Yes, please make more to fill in the crappyness of Rami's sprites.


Here it goes:
I have posted today to tell you all that I will be disclosing Pokemon: Purple Version until around June 18th to June 20th. Its very hard to mix in with my regular schedule, with the homework, social life, and the hap of stuff. Along with working on my artz, and maybe opening a deviant art account.

Akoro
06-02-2008, 02:02 AM
I'm sorry, but I have found A LOT of things with this comic. One... Remember, people read left-right up-down, not right-left down-up or anything like that. So in comics, you always put the thing you want people to read first on the TOP LEFT, then next to it to the right, if there's no room, then just below it. No matter WHERE the person talking is.

Second, it is very hard to find out which panel I'm supposed to read. Maybe make them a little more spread out and/or use the first thing, except for the panels?

Third, the storyline is very random, easily drifting of track, unpredictable(which is, however, good), and well... Not really a storyline. If you try to have more of a storyline it focuses on, that would make it much better. Take the games for example. Say... PMD. It follows a straight storyline, and is also very easy to read. They don't drift off the storyline, and say random stuff about cookies(they are yummy though :hungry:). I mean, it would just be FUNNY... And bad... If say... a Meowth just randomly came up saying "I'm not a thief. Because I have cookies!" when it had just stolen in front of everyone.

That's all I have.

Kirby Grunt
06-02-2008, 05:12 AM
I'm sorry, but I have found A LOT of things with this comic. One... Remember, people read left-right up-down, not right-left down-up or anything like that. So in comics, you always put the thing you want people to read first on the TOP LEFT, then next to it to the right, if there's no room, then just below it. No matter WHERE the person talking is.

Second, it is very hard to find out which panel I'm supposed to read. Maybe make them a little more spread out and/or use the first thing, except for the panels?

Third, the storyline is very random, easily drifting of track, unpredictable(which is, however, good), and well... Not really a storyline. If you try to have more of a storyline it focuses on, that would make it much better. Take the games for example. Say... PMD. It follows a straight storyline, and is also very easy to read. They don't drift off the storyline, and say random stuff about cookies(they are yummy though :hungry:). I mean, it would just be FUNNY... And bad... If say... a Meowth just randomly came up saying "I'm not a thief. Because I have cookies!" when it had just stolen in front of everyone.

That's all I have.
1/2.) I have found a way (lol found it!) to finnally put some organization into my comics

3.) Storyline will be Introduced sometime in june/this month

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