[POEM] Whenever we are Together...

[Tamer San]

Whenever we are Together...
by Tamer

You mean so much to me,
more than I could ever say.
And even for you to believe,
I mean it in ever way.

Whenever we are together,
nothing can go wrong.
And I started to think,
that with you is where I belong.

Whenever we are together,
I thank God for that blessing.
Without you by my side,
I think I'll keep on missing.

You take away my sadness,
you take, with your smile, my pain.
This feeling when I'm with you,
is nothing I can explain.

I wish that I could be with you,
all throughout each day.
Therefore the smile I want on my face,
would never have to go away.

You've always been there for me,
no matter what I've gone through.
So I just want to take this chance to say:
"Thank you and I love you..."

A/N: One of my best poems *sniffs*

[Pokemon Trainer Sarah]

This is amazing, like all your other work Tamer ^^ It's truely inspiring!

[Tamer San]

I am so glad that you liked it Sarah, and it seems that you are the only one in here that reads my poems which I am thankful for :happy:

[Thanatos]

Wow...people need to come here more often.

Nice poem Tamer, I really like it. Your grasp of the English language is far better then mine, and it isn't even your first language.

Once again, beautiful poem.

*sniffs*

[!CeMAn]

what's that poem about, Sam?

[Tamer San]

What exactly do you mean? Where are you leading us to with your question man? It is a simple "I love you poem", those are almost same words I told my girlfriend in arabic and I found them great, so I came back home, written it in english with ryhm and rythem and viola...

[Exon Auxus]

Whenever we are Together...
by Tamer

You mean so much to me,
more than I could ever say.
And even for you to believe,
I mean it in ever way.

Whenever we are together,
nothing can go wrong.
And I started to think,
that with you is where I belong.

Whenever we are together,
I thank God for that blessing.
Without you by my side,
I think I'll keep on missing.

You take away my sadness,
you take, with your smile, my pain.
This feeling when I'm with you,
is nothing I can explain.

I wish that I could be with you,
all throughout each day.
Therefore the smile I want on my face,
would never have to go away.

You've always been there for me,
no matter what I've gone through.
So I just want to take this chance to say:
"Thank you and I love you..."

A/N: One of my best poems *sniffs*

Great job! Please make more poems for us to see.

[double o G]

Man we need to make like a poetry jam topic.(people that go to my school would know what its like.)(SilverScarmory im calling you out)Its where you share your poems in one topic,Except we will grade the poems that were said.

[Deoxysfan]

That poem is wonderful you should do more.

[!CeMAn]

What exactly do you mean? Where are you leading us to with your question man? It is a simple "I love you poem", those are almost same words I told my girlfriend in arabic and I found them great, so I came back home, written it in english with ryhm and rythem and viola...

Well... i guess i was leading up to pointing out that poem could easily be interpreted as one about your mother. i asked what it was about because i wasn't sure.

it's cute. A fine poem, settle down.

[Tamer San]

I am always settled down Ice =P don't worry. And yeah, after reading it again, it could e for a mother or a friend. :ermm:

[!CeMAn]

The point i wanted 2 make was unless you want it left to interpretation, you could add something to make it personal, more specific. if it's written for the young lady, you should.