TEAM FOR RATING!!! thankyou!!

[Falco-X]

Pokemon 1:

Tyranitar
-Item:Leftovers
-Nature:Adamant
-Ability:Sandstream
-EV Distribution: 252 attk 252 speed 4 hp
-Moveset: Dragon Dance
Thunder wave
Earthquake
Stone Edge

Pokemon 2:

Metagross
-Item:Life Orb
-Nature:Adamant
-Ability:Clear Body
-EV Distribution: 252 attk 252 speed 4 hp
-Moveset:Earthquake
Meteor Mash
Explosion
Agility

Pokemon 3:

Venusaur
-Item:Leftovers
-Nature:Modest
-Ability:Overgrow
-EV Distribution: 252 sp attk 252 spd 4 hp
-Moveset:Sleep powder
Synthesis
Energy ball
Frenzy Plant (couldn't help myself)

Pokemon 4:

Milotic
-Item:Lum berry
-Nature:Modest
-Ability:Marvel scale
-EV Distribution: 252 sp attk 252 spd 4 hp
-Moveset: Hypnosis
Recover
Surf
Ice beam

pokemon 5:

Dragonite
-Item:Lum berry
-Nature:Adamant
-Ability:Iner focus
-EV Distribution: 252 attk 252 spd 4 hp
-Moveset:Dragon Dance
Fly
Outrage
Earthquake

Pokemon 6:

Snorlax
-Item:Leftovers (i've yet to meet a snorlax without it)
-Nature:Adamant
-Ability:Thick fat
-EV Distribution: 252 attk 252 def 4 hp
-Moveset:Curse
Amnesia
Rest
Earthquake


Well that is my team for PEARL, i have taken a long time in creating it, i've been playing since red hence some of the old classics (i can never resist) i would like it to be rated please.

Could you please rate out of ten and any useful comments please.

Thankyou again.:happy:

[Viva la Gofre]

Pokemon 1:

Tyranitar
-Item: Life Orb
-Nature:Adamant
-Ability:Sandstream
-EV Distribution: 252 attk 96spd160 hp
-Moveset: Dragon Dance
Pursuit/Crunch
Earthquake
Stone Edge
This is one of the most powerfull offensive pokes out there, TWave is a waste on him
Pokemon 2:

Metagross
-Item:Life Orb
-Nature:Adamant
-Ability:Clear Body
-EV Distribution: 252 attk 152HP/104Spd
-Moveset:Earthquake
Meteor Mash
Explosion/Thunderpunch
Agility
Consider thunderpunch because at the moment skarmory loves you.
Pokemon 3:

Venusaur
-Item:Leftovers
-Nature:Calm
-Ability:Overgrow
-EV Distribution: 252 HP 252 SpDef/6SpAtt
-Moveset:Sleep powder
Leech Seed
Energy ball/Grass knot
SludgeBomb/HP fire
By picking a move because you couldnt help yourself, you are in fact refusing to help yourself. Two-turn moves are utter crap, especially one with coverage as bad as grass. Needs a defensive EV spread

Pokemon 4:

Milotic
-Item:Leftovers
-Nature:Bold
-Ability:Marvel scale
-EV Distribution: 148HP/200Def/56SpAtt/104SpAtt
-Moveset: Hypnosis
Recover
Surf
Ice beam
Lefties for items. If ever there was a poke you wouldnt mind being statused, this was it. Marvel scale gives a significant defence boost when under status, and being a wall it can cope with burns and regular poisining's damage quite well (Watch for toxic). On the note of walls, stop giving defensive pokes offensive movesets.

pokemon 5:

Dragonite
-Item: Life Orb
-Nature:Jolly
-Ability:Iner focus
-EV Distribution: 252 attk 252 spd 4 hp
-Moveset:Dragon Dance
Outrage
Fire Punch
Earthquake
Erm, fly? FLY? Sorry but it annoys me when people use obviously crap moves, where fly rates extremely highly. Fire Punch for coverage please.

Pokemon 6:

Snorlax
-Item:Leftovers (i've yet to meet a snorlax without it) With good reason
-Nature:Careful
-Ability:Thick fat
-EV Distribution: 244HP/28Def/236SpDef
-Moveset:Earthquake/Crunch
Body Slam
Rest
Sleep Talk
Stop with the aggressive walls :|

Well that is my team for PEARL, i have taken a long time in creating it, i've been playing since red hence some of the old classics (i can never resist) i would like it to be rated please.

Could you please rate out of ten and any useful comments please.

Thankyou again.:happy:

Mixape 6-0s you tbh. Close Combat gets rid of TTar and Snorlax, Flamethrower/Fire punch gets rid of venasaur and milotic, HP Ice destorys DNite and Grass knot deals with Milotic. TTar does nothing for this team, since metagros covers the same stuff and doesnt wear your own pokes down. Starmie is a great mixape counter. You also need spin support, so starmie suits you well:
Starmie@Leftovers
Timid
160HP/132SpAtt/216Spd
Rapid Spin
Surf
Thunderbolt
Recover

Use that in the place of tyranitar. Metagros is also a better choice for a lead. Dragonite covers pretty much the same stuff, so consider swapping it for a mixed sweeper.

[Falco-X]

Thanks for the advise i'll.... um..... take it under advisement. Apart from taking Tyranitar out of the team, its my signature poke has been since silver i just won't put it in first posision. thanks anyway.

[Starkipraggy]

Thanks for the advise i'll.... um..... take it under advisement. Apart from taking Tyranitar out of the team, its my signature poke has been since silver i just won't put it in first posision. thanks anyway.
You could drop Metagross instead and lead with Aerodactyl so your Tyranitar can sit back.

Aerodactyl@Life Orb
Trait: Pressure
EVs: 252 ATk/ 252 Spd/ 4 HP
Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge
- Ice Fang
- Thunder Fang/Crunch

You could go with Choice Band if you want to. Just make sure that Aero has MAX SPEED IVS and you're set.

Curselax was quite common in 3rd gen, but with all the bloody Close Combaters running around now (Heracross, Infernape, Lucario) Curselax is basically a waste of a slot. D: Freaking OHKO!!!

[Viva la Gofre]

You could drop Metagross instead and lead with Aerodactyl so your Tyranitar can sit back.

Aerodactyl@Life Orb
Trait: Pressure
EVs: 252 ATk/ 252 Spd/ 4 HP
Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge
- Ice Fang
- Thunder Fang/Crunch

You could go with Choice Band if you want to. Just make sure that Aero has MAX SPEED IVS and you're set.

Curselax was quite common in 3rd gen, but with all the bloody Close Combaters running around now (Heracross, Infernape, Lucario) Curselax is basically a waste of a slot. D: Freaking OHKO!!!
At the moment he's overdosing on physical attackers, he doesnt need another.

[Falco-X]

i'm not changing the line-up ok. enough with it

[Starkipraggy]

At the moment he's overdosing on physical attackers, he doesnt need another.
What, replace it with Metagross with Jolteon? x3

And wait a minute, Mixape can take out Milotic with Fire Punch/Flamethrower? I don't believe you. D:<

[Spongebob Number One Fan]

...Grass Knot beats it anyways =/ He mentioned that too >_<

And get rid of Curselax. Resttalk sets are much better for special walling. But Close Combat isn't the reason it's ineffective, since Heracross and MAchamp actually did exist in Advance and even GSC. It's because Snorlax has other things to worry about, like special attackers it can no longer wall without effort.

But uh, yeah, what others said. Nothing on your team can switch into CBgross and other hard hitters, so I would really recommend switching up the lineup a bit.