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Tamer San
05-29-2005, 01:24 PM
I Love You
by Tamer
I've been looking for answer's for so long
And they were right in front of me
And now I know
What before I didn't see
You were always there
You picked me up when I fell
You were there for me
You saved me from my hell
Your brought me out of my dreams
And into reality
You made me happy
Showed me your hospitality
I never thought
I could fall in love
But you called to me
Like an angel from above
I stuck by you
When you tried to push me away
I wouldn't leave you
I'll be there every single day
You make life worth living
Without you I don't know what I'd do
Because I don't know if you realize
That I really love you
~Tamer
double o G
05-29-2005, 04:02 PM
Good.....Except ewwww who do you love.lol.Xddd
Tamer San
05-29-2005, 04:07 PM
If you are thinking of Shane then forget it, BUT, nevertheless, Shane worths such a poem. Anyway, this was written for my RL girl :wink:
double o G
05-29-2005, 04:28 PM
Im telling CaptianC.xdddddd
Tamer San
05-29-2005, 04:38 PM
Good.....Except ewwww who do you love.lol.Xddd
Ewwww? Listen n00b, I hate flaming and yelling, and I am also known as one of the nicest on the forums, but if i heard you replying to any of my posts anymore you're a dead man. I am not a boyfriend of a sludge or something, and believe me, if you saw the picture of my girl you'll be jealous your self so don't be "Ewww-ing". Now scram...and I mean it. :susp:
EDIT:
Sorry for losing my temper, but still, I won't allow you to reply, at least to my poems. You are the first ever that made my angry, at least on public in this forums >_> after Raik...anyway, back off and we'll be fine...
double o G
05-29-2005, 06:06 PM
Sorry I was just kidding I will never post again.
vellyvell
05-29-2005, 06:15 PM
Sorry I was just kidding I will never post again.
lol tamer u hurt the kid, thats not nice, Double O G no teasing, teasing very bad, nice poem tamer, Velly POSTED *GASP*
Tamer San
05-29-2005, 06:22 PM
VELLY IS POSTING *Hugs Velly*
Meh, I guess you are correct Velly, I am sorry double o G, but you hurt me...really...nevermind what I said, but be nicer next time. :wink:
FLIP Joven
05-29-2005, 06:45 PM
Its cool, I like it. It's pretty good, I've said this before but I relate to it.
Sorry I was just kidding I will never post again.
Good.
That was very deep and wonderful Tamer. I mainly posted to say that we could finally shut the n00b up, but I do love the poem, and I hope she likes it if she sees it.
Karisuma-Teichou
05-29-2005, 09:28 PM
If you are thinking of Shane then forget it, BUT, nevertheless, Shane worths such a poem. Anyway, this was written for my RL girl :wink:
Lol...when I saw it I thought...oh god don't tell me this is for me. xDD
double o G
06-01-2005, 06:03 PM
Good poem Tamer.Very good I only like raps but I gotta admit that was raw.
Defense.2-I'm getting tired of you talking aabout me.Stop talking about Silver Skarmory and !ceman too.Silver Scarmory isnt my friend anymore but stop calling him names.!ceman does nothing too you and you called him a n00b.dont ever call me a name or a n00b again.Stop Talking about me and my friends or Ill get a Gmod,Hoenn Mirror girl for example on you.
Have a nice day.
Edit:Sorry for interupting your topic tamer,some things have to be dealt with.
Kawaii_Kiitie
06-02-2005, 02:57 AM
For the msot part, I like it, I liekd how it started, you could you some commas ans periods though. ^^, to give it a better flow...I also like how it ended, but there are some parts I don't like, the point of the poem is good, I jsut think, the wroding could be better, and stuff, to try and give it a better flow and yah, but it's still good. ^^;
Deoxysfan
06-02-2005, 03:18 AM
I think it's a really great poem.
It one of the best poems I've seen.
double o G
06-02-2005, 03:39 AM
yep it is one of the best poems.
Tamer San
06-02-2005, 07:10 AM
I am glad you all liked it, thanks a lot guys ^^
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