~My Poems~

[Kawaii_Kiitie]

um..er, they really suck, but I'll post them anyways. ^^;

I cover my eyes


I cover my eyes
to hide from reality,
to hide from my pain.
I cover my eyes
in hope things wil lget better,
in hope everything will be okay again.
I cover my eyes
tp hide from the world
to hide from my life
I cover my eyes
wishing to go back to normal,
wishing I was okay again.
I cover my eyes
and now I go through life blind.


I walk alone


True saddness over comes me
pure darkness falls upon me,
I now walk alone
since you left me,
my heart has shattered
like glass,
I cry for your forgiveness
I cry for your friendship,
I now walk alone
since you left me,
I'm here alone and scared
I'm here crying and afriad,
I now walk alone
without you here with me.




When things are better


Maybe some day
when things are better
you will come and see,
see what I see,
see the flowers and trees.

Maybe some day
when things are better
you will come and hear,
hear what I hear,
hear the birds and angels sing.

Maybe some day
when things are better
you will come
so I can show you,
Show you everything
that is beautiful to me.




What I woudln't do

I would sit outside
your house
each and every day
in the pouring rain
just to seeyour face,
I would cross
every river or sea
ever hill top or mountain
just to be near you,
I would call you
unill you answered
jsut to hear your voice,
theres nothing that
I wouldn't do
for you,
I would sit outside your house
each and every day
in the pouring rain.



Friends No More

Like a broken mirror
or shattered glass
our friendship is no more,
It pains me to know
it's unbareable to think of,
Oh why did you have to go?

I know friends don't last forever,
but I always thought
that we would,
I always thought of us
as friends till then end
friends forever.

As it brings me pain
I will not show,
not a single tear
will fall,
even though I hurt so bad
I will not show.

I don't even know
why we are fighting,
I just wish
that we were friends again,
Friends till the end
friends forever.

[Finglonger]

I like the first one, It seems that a lot of people prefer to close their eyes so to speak and hide from reality, and settle into a state of complacent comfort. Occasionally everyone shields themselves from a painful experience and just sort of pretend that nothing happened. Ignorance trruly is blis sometimes, eh?

I can really relate to the last one, I've recently lost a couple of good friends and it really hurts you know? It sounds like you've experienced that before too...

Actually I liked all of them except the second one, it was kind of cliche, but other than that keep up the good work. I hope you'll post some more, because I enjoyed reading them

[Kawaii_Kiitie]

I can really relate to the last one, I've recently lost a couple of good friends and it really hurts you know? It sounds like you've experienced that before too...

...Well, I never really lost a good friend, jsut gotten into some fights, actually, all my poems I write are about my friends, ever single one of them...^^;

I only posted these ones, because these are the ones that are published, I'll psot my other ones that are published later, too lazzy to right now, and thanks. ^_^ Glad you enjoyed them.

[Tamer San]

This is so deep Kiitie, I loved them...keep on poetry ^^

[Pokemon Trainer Sarah]

These poems are very very good! You're doing a great job and I can't wait to see more of your work! ^_^ The only think I can suggest is quickly skim over and fix up some of your spelling errors 'cos they kind of ruin the atmosphere/feel/mood (Not sure which word to use x3) of the poem. Anyway keep up the great work!

[Kawaii_Kiitie]

Yah. I should look through for typo's, but I'm too lazzy, I'll jsut try to type with out typo's. ^^

Here are some more though, hope you like them...


This one was written about my best friend Sarah...


Please Don't

If I called you on the telephone
would you listen?
please don't hang up.
If I was falling
would you catch me?
please don't let me drop.
If I were sad
would you cheer me up?
please don't let me cry.
You mean everythig to me
without youI will die,
please don't go.

^^;

Here is another one, this one isn't very good, I don't like it very much, but I'll still post it, this is about my other best friend, Jeremy, me and him weren't really in a fight when I wrote this, we jsut, weren't talking for some reason...

Invisible Person

You walked past me
without even a glance
towards me
as if you didn't know me,
You ignored me
when I tried to talk with you
as if you could see
right through me,
I feel as if
I'm invisible,
You walked past me
with out even a glance
towards me.


this one isn't really about anyone...I was watching the news when I wrote it...
Silent Death

I cried a thousand tears
no one seemed to hear,
My silent tears
fall to the ground,
I screamed in pain
no one seemed to care,
bout my silent screams
croming from me,
whne I dissapeared
no one seemed to notice,
that I was gone
I died a silent death,
no one seemed to hear
my silent tears.



I'll post more later, but for now, what do you think of these?