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Serious95
08-23-2008, 02:34 PM
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Umbreon:Impish,252hp,128 def,124 Sp def
Leftovers
Curse/wish/baton pass/payback

Blastoise:Hardy 40hp,212 attack,252 sp def
life orb
Aqua Jet/Avalanche/Rapid Spin/Earthquake

Breloom:Adamant 252 attack 252 speed
toxic orb
Seed Bomb/Focus Punch/Sub/Spore

Staraptor:Adamant 252 attack 252 speed
Choice scarf
U turn/Return/Brave Bird/Close Combat

Blissey:Bold 252 hp 252 sp def
Leftovers
Softboiled/Aromatherpy/Seismic Toss/Thunder Wave

Swampert:Relaxed 252 hp 252 def
None
Roar/Brick Break/Earthquake/Waterfall

Tactics: Umbreon uses Curse then baton passes to Blastoise who uses Aqua Jet

Viva la Gofre
08-23-2008, 04:35 PM
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Umbreon:Impish,252hp,200 Att, 56SpDef
Leftovers
Curse/wish/baton pass/payback
STandard Curse Passer. I wouldnt recommend leading with it though.

Blastoise:Impish/Bold252HP/252Def/4SpDef
Leftovers
Rapid Spin
Waterfall/Surf
Avalanche/ Ice Beam
Toxic/Yawn
Utility Blastoise needs a bulkier build than you have given it. For move choice, choose whether you want impish and the first two or bold and the 2nd two.

Breloom:Adamant 252 attack, 212Spd, 44HP
toxic orb
Seed Bomb/Focus Punch/Sub/Spore
Those 44 Speed EVs dont outspeed anything of note, so they can be invested in HP. Set's Fine

Staraptor:Adamant 252 attack 60HP, 196Spd
Choice scarf
U turn/Return/Brave Bird/Close Combat
As above, you have an excess of speed EVs that can be invested elsewhere.

Blissey:Calm 252Def/216SpDef/40HP
Leftovers
Softboiled/Aromatherpy/Seismic Toss/Thunder Wave
Standard aromatherapy bliss please- Yours dies to tackle without Def EVs. It's HP stat is large enough to work with little boost.

Swampert:Relaxed 240 hp 216 Def, 52SpAtt
None
Roar/Ice Beam/Earthquake/Surf
Mixpert please, your team really needs it.

Tactics: Umbreon uses Curse then baton passes to Blastoise who uses Aqua Jet

The set's arent bad, but at the moment physical walls go OLOL! at you since you have literally nothing that can use special attacks. Switch either Breloom or Staraptor for a special sweeper, since both have the same coverage anyway. Mixpert and standard Utility blastoise will also help balance it out.

Exta
08-23-2008, 04:51 PM
Why would you ever give cursepass Umbreon 200 Atk EVs?
Just jam them all into spdef. :/
And it should be careful, not impish.

There's too much wrong with this team for me to really rate it, so I'm not going to try. Sorry.

Viva la Gofre
08-23-2008, 04:59 PM
Why would you ever give cursepass Umbreon 200 Atk EVs?
Just jam them all into spdef. :/
And it should be careful, not impish.

There's too much wrong with this team for me to really rate it, so I'm not going to try. Sorry.
I merely posted the smogon standard, but i did put the wrong nature.

Exta
08-23-2008, 05:05 PM
I merely posted the smogon standard, but i did put the wrong nature.
Ah, I looked it up on there, and that set is made to curse, not necessarily curespass.. So now I see the reason for the attack EVs, but they're unnecessary with how he's utilizing it.

But I do agree, Umbreon shouldn't be a lead, and with all that spdef, Blissey isn't needed, so I'd say if anything, Blissey should be taken off and replaced with a special attacker as you said, and Staraptor or Swampert makes a decent lead. Really, the whole team needs revamping if it's going to actually be decent, though.

Lelouch vi Britannia
08-23-2008, 05:15 PM
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Umbreon:Impish,252hp,128 def,124 Sp def
Leftovers
Curse/wish/baton pass/payback
good!

Blastoise:Hardy 40hp ,212 attack,252 sp def
life orb
Aqua Jet/Ice Beam/Rapid Spin/Earthquake
Looks fine

Breloom:Adamant 252 attack 252 speed 4 SpD
toxic orb
Seed Bomb/Focus Punch/Sub/Spore
good

Staraptor:Adamant 252 attack 252 speed 4 Hp
Choice scarf
U turn/Return/Brave Bird/Close Combat
Looks Fine

Blissey:Bold 252 hp 252 sp def 4 def
Leftovers
Softboiled/Aromatherpy/Seismic Toss/Thunder Wave
This looks good

Swampert:Relaxed 252 hp 252 def 4 SpD
None
Roar/Brick Break/Earthquake/Waterfall
looks good. But your missing 4 Evs in 4 pokemon...

Tactics: Umbreon uses Curse then baton passes to Blastoise who uses Aqua Jet

I'll say this team is well built. You'll probably want a Ice Move somewhere in there for Dragons. They can do really big damage to this team.

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