FLIP Joven
06-18-2005, 04:09 AM
Hey everybody, I decided to post some of my written work. Please tell me what you really really think. Be completely honest and tell me what I need to improve and whatever. I don't have a title for it, cause I don't know what to name it, well here you go:
I'm sittin' here thinkin' about how I failed again
thinkin' how I failed to be close friends
thinkin' how it was my fault I couldn't talk to you
thinkin' how I could sort my feelings through
Right now I'm just thinkin' how I'm gonna deal with life without you
It's already late
and now times runnin' out so fast, that I just can't think
straight
Don't know where you are, and I don't even know if I'm gonna tell you what I've been wanting to say
But I'm waiting here, wasting my time,
I just keep thinkin' about how I already made another mistake
I only have 3 days left, I just can't get my mind set
I'm so busy right now and everything is a wreck
just want to get things off my chest
I wanna tell you these secrets I've kept
before I look back on this as something I'll really regret
But man, I just keep thinking, thinking it's too late and I know your not gonna stay and wait for me
I want to be a man and talk to you about it cause I feel like apart of my world can't go on without it let go and even without you
Sometimes I wondered if you had any clue if I cared for you too
These past few years, I've always just wanted to make the first move, but I just didn't want to cause I just felt it was too soon
I'm so down, I just don't know why
Right now I just wanna cry
Now I wish I could've just tried to tell you my feelings in the inside
I'd hate to see you go without letting you know how I feel
I don't know how long its gonna take when my heart's gonna heal
Your leaving and I don't know hen your ever coming back
but the only part of you left in me is the picture that I'm looking at on my lap
So as your about to pack, I just hope you won't forget about the one guy that cared for you so much
If only I could get one last touch
of you before we part ways
Before your memories of me don't stay within you
before the last moment we see each other
Once I know your going away, I just can't lie
that its not gonna hurt me when we say goodbye
Chorus:
I just can't let you go
until I let you know how I cared about you inside
all this time
You never knew the tears I've been holding back these few days just cause I wanted to tell you these feelings I had
You never knew how I tried and tried
to tell you, before you said goodbye
I'm sittin' here thinkin' about how I failed again
thinkin' how I failed to be close friends
thinkin' how it was my fault I couldn't talk to you
thinkin' how I could sort my feelings through
Right now I'm just thinkin' how I'm gonna deal with life without you
It's already late
and now times runnin' out so fast, that I just can't think
straight
Don't know where you are, and I don't even know if I'm gonna tell you what I've been wanting to say
But I'm waiting here, wasting my time,
I just keep thinkin' about how I already made another mistake
I only have 3 days left, I just can't get my mind set
I'm so busy right now and everything is a wreck
just want to get things off my chest
I wanna tell you these secrets I've kept
before I look back on this as something I'll really regret
But man, I just keep thinking, thinking it's too late and I know your not gonna stay and wait for me
I want to be a man and talk to you about it cause I feel like apart of my world can't go on without it let go and even without you
Sometimes I wondered if you had any clue if I cared for you too
These past few years, I've always just wanted to make the first move, but I just didn't want to cause I just felt it was too soon
I'm so down, I just don't know why
Right now I just wanna cry
Now I wish I could've just tried to tell you my feelings in the inside
I'd hate to see you go without letting you know how I feel
I don't know how long its gonna take when my heart's gonna heal
Your leaving and I don't know hen your ever coming back
but the only part of you left in me is the picture that I'm looking at on my lap
So as your about to pack, I just hope you won't forget about the one guy that cared for you so much
If only I could get one last touch
of you before we part ways
Before your memories of me don't stay within you
before the last moment we see each other
Once I know your going away, I just can't lie
that its not gonna hurt me when we say goodbye
Chorus:
I just can't let you go
until I let you know how I cared about you inside
all this time
You never knew the tears I've been holding back these few days just cause I wanted to tell you these feelings I had
You never knew how I tried and tried
to tell you, before you said goodbye