View Full Version : Rap battle: !ceman VS Amaru (24 hour deadline)

06-20-2005, 11:33 AM
Round 1.

f-u-n-h, -o-u-z-e
im callin you out right here, dont try to flee
uh-huh, you know its me when i step to the plate
a twist of fate, when i grab the mic i never hesitate
a master of humiliation, shakin your plans
with the art of persuasion, im takin your fans
dont show me any mercy cos im new to the game
soon all that cheered you on will be callin my name
why? i keep it real, aint no hollywood rhymes
no guns, knives, hoes, i dont fake no drivebys
welcome to the real world, dont talk (cuss)
if you gonna bring it to me, bring it real when you spit
Im handin you the mic, time to show what you got
if you thought i was good before boy, prepare to be shocked.

06-21-2005, 03:21 AM
All i spit is real deal, no guns in my rappin/
i just clutch the mic and man, i pimp slap it!
First i show it who's the man
then i show you/
then i show up and your show, grab your crown and over throw you!
You can still keep every one of your fans, i don't want top 40/
all that mainstream-radio-crap, it's so boring!
it's time to find the fun, time to show everyone/
time to pick the mic up and blow the generation gap
i'm the revolution that's hitting like a storm/
so real you can feel i'm beyond the norm!
Like supernatural events/
i amaze and astound!
i got the whole wide world hypnotised by my sound!
You ain't seen nuthin, kid, pound for pound/
My crazy sick rhymes knock you flat to the ground!
Just when you think it's over, you get driven further down!
Like i said before:
i'll friggin whip-kick-flip-lick-wack you down/
With a forked tongue lash/
Bring on the smack-down!!

06-21-2005, 03:40 AM
You guys suck

06-21-2005, 03:45 AM
Please, show us how it's done :rolleyes:.

06-21-2005, 03:55 AM
i'll tear this herb and.. you can tell me where it's hurtin
your style is like a washed up Jacent, the generic version
ya got terrible wordin, and kap's wack.. i bet he'll sway
but eat all of it you want... your **** will never be Special, K
watch my metal spray, because your plan's off bluntly
n you'll never coast to the win like living in a landlocked country
this man's wrong monthly, you ain't hard..so save it, ****
cuz you play the ***** on RB... AND in your relationship
disgraceful kid.. never takes advantage, and my hunch is..
..that the ONLY thing you capitalize on is your punches
easily the dumbest, you can tell me who drops wack ****
when we KNOW that your verse will be personals that lack wit
you ******, Spanish ain't hiding it, i'll have ya tore just the same
and i'm willing to bet a pito is in more than your name


06-21-2005, 04:02 AM
Alls I have to say to !ceman and Amaru is....OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH! You got served.


06-21-2005, 04:23 AM
Served what?
Some friggin mexican fart bean salad ****?
i don't have a damn clue what you just said, kid!
Your rhythm was even worse than that tired verse/
that you tried to blurt-
Hellll, didn't even hurt
You can't come off hard with bad words & slang/
You're a nerd, acting tough with a butt on his wangg-chung,
i'm done!
Capitalize on this..
oops, 2 late
A rap-slap for your lips!
And Jhoto trainer..
Stay outta this!

06-21-2005, 04:26 AM
Dude, really, you suck. shut up.

06-21-2005, 04:27 AM
Dude, REALLY, you suck worse. Go back to bed.

06-21-2005, 04:30 AM
LMAO !ceman. Yours didn't make since. His did. He wins you lose. HAHA.


06-21-2005, 04:30 AM
THat was a good comeback... I better leave cause ur so good at contradicting.

06-21-2005, 04:39 AM
Yeah you better leave, get the hell out of this thread. You have no talent and you're not wanted. SERiOUSLY, you have NO RHYTHM in that garbage. Go listen to your 50 cent C.D. and stop acting like a punk.

06-21-2005, 04:39 AM
you're still talking?

06-21-2005, 05:51 AM
Wtf? Who are you rapping to? None of your attacks were aimed at either me or !cy, I smell BS. Sounds incredibly similar to an Eminem freestyle Ive heard.

06-21-2005, 06:40 AM
lmao, pwned Jhem. =D Rap sucks, stay in school.

06-21-2005, 03:13 PM
Rap sucks
Not to sound angsty, but if you dont like rap, why do you feel the need to tell us it sucks?

06-21-2005, 10:55 PM
Hey leave Smurfette alone. it sounded like he's on our side.

06-21-2005, 11:35 PM
Liek d00d he liek sed teh rap is teh suXX0r, dai!!!!111!!1

Im not sure whos side he was on, but i just hate comments like the one i quoted above...

06-22-2005, 01:00 AM
Hey i don't care what he said about rappin. As long as he's dissing on Jhem, and i'm not getting tag teamed against like last night, he's a friend.

06-22-2005, 02:57 AM
Okay wth is going on here? I'll tell you. Jhem you can stop being an ass. JT you can stop being stupid. Smurf you can stay off this thread. Iceman you can stop with the idiocy, as two wrongs don't generally make it right. Amaru you can stop the leet speak and crap.

Got it? Well that or die. ;)

06-22-2005, 11:07 AM
0.0 .....Thanks for stopping the fight, but I dont leet speak, that was just mispelling words etc, a n00b impression, well aside from suXX0r.. But I dont see why you had to reprimand me for that.. ??

06-22-2005, 02:01 PM
I see no rap for the last 10 posts or so. I demand my money back >=(

(Or get back to rappin!)

06-22-2005, 03:40 PM
Hey, guys, When I was saying you guys suck, I was just joking. Who knew it would go this far. I was just messing with you guys. I was in a chat room and someone saw the post and I thought it would be kinda funny to post somehting, and it was. :crackup: . Anyways, the rap I posted was ripped off some black guy from some other totally different forum... and NOT Eminem *stares at Amaru*. Anyways this whole thing was a joke, and I guess I was just being an ass that night so... sorry guys. No hard feelings? Get back to freestyle rap dissing without interruption from me :biggrin:.

ANd I gotta say, really guys, even if someone says rap sucks (which IN MY OPINION, it does), that's just my opinion. So don't take it personally when someone who isn't really judging this thing to say something bad about it. You like rap, and what I think shouldn't really affect what you think about me or what you think about rap or whatever. :eh:

I apologized now and made up for what I did, which was the start all this, so now I suggest that all this fighting stop after what I did, because any more arguing beyond this point is ridiculous, pointless, and out of your own idiocy.

ANyways, sorry again, take it easy :cool:

06-22-2005, 03:44 PM
Hey chill peeps I don't really know whos is better etc, but get back in to the flow and btw, 24 hour deadline shouldn't this be over? anyways just try not to piss eachother of k oh and hope I didnt just piss you of :ermm: sorry if I did I'm just tring to help.

EDIT: oh well he has just cooled things while I was writeing lol.

06-22-2005, 03:47 PM

erhem.... *cough*...

Yeah, see? That's all I got...

06-22-2005, 03:54 PM

erhem.... *cough*...

Yeah, see? That's all I got...

ROFLMAO thanks that was totaly random heheh.

06-23-2005, 12:44 AM
the rap I posted was ripped off some black guy from some other totally different forum... and NOT Eminem *stares at Amaru*.
Well it still looks very similar, whos to say the guy you ripped it off didnt bite Eminem?

And Im not affected by anyones opinion and you're welcome to share it I suppose, but you must agree its a little rude to come into our rap battle just to say rap sucks.. Points to an above post.

Anyway, I read your apology and the fact you were just joking. And, congratulations, you officially fooled me.. Seriously, that was a good one.

06-23-2005, 02:37 AM
Yea, I was in the chatroom too. That's why I was acting stupid. *stares at Kenny*

Sorry !ce, and Amaru.

06-23-2005, 04:41 AM
Wouldnt have expected that behaviour of a mod, but ok.

Anyway, my reply:

Extra extra - latest news in
!cy battles back, only to take more abusin
its confusin, your choosin to try and fight back
when you know as well as i do you gonna get slapped
by my dominating rhymes, boy get with times
when i flip flop my flow, your a$$ is mine
Haha, thats my reaction to your attmempt,
to put me in my place cos no-ones exempt
from my verbal lashings, smashing your dreams
to be the greatest MC, cos you gotta get through me
I strive to be the greatest, despite all the biters
you step outta place, ill mothercussin snipe ya
go back to battling kiddies, cos i aint no playmate
So take your forked tongue and slither away, snake.

---> I kept it very short, and very crap. But there was a lapse in rapping on this topic.