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~HKe~
07-10-2005, 05:17 PM
I just started this at Serebii and i didn't like the first comic I made. So I made a new one. I give you: The Nintendo World!

1: Villans Unite (http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/2610/co11rl.png)


Current Comic:

http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/2610/co11rl.png (http://www.imageshack.us)

Umbreon Shadow
07-10-2005, 10:34 PM
lol that's funny but why is lance there?

~HKe~
07-11-2005, 11:34 AM
I don't really know. I just sorta recolored him and put him as a villian because the King Dedede sprite was too big. I named him The Dragon Master.

Ionem
07-19-2005, 02:23 AM
But Lance is so awesome to bea bad guy. :(

Anyway, as a sprite comic, I'm sorry to say, but it's realy just subpar. You need a background for one. Better dialogue placement, etc, and overall a better layout. Let's see if I can give you an example quick. I'll recreate one panel.

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y263/ionem/what.png

Matthew
07-19-2005, 08:03 AM
Ionem... must you pwn at everything? :rolleyes: :goofy:

Anyways, take his advice and improve it... I wasn't pleased at all with the comic because of its layout... fix that and your good =P

Dragon Lover
07-19-2005, 02:10 PM
But Lance is so awesome to bea bad guy. :(

Anyway, as a sprite comic, I'm sorry to say, but it's realy just subpar. You need a background for one. Better dialogue placement, etc, and overall a better layout. Let's see if I can give you an example quick. I'll recreate one panel.

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y263/ionem/what.png

I see nother Global-Mod.... I agree with everything you said.

Ionem
07-20-2005, 04:22 AM
Ionem... must you pwn at everything?

I can't compose music. :D