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Old 04-10-2007, 01:29 AM
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Default Re: Inferno Island

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Originally Posted by FireflyK View Post
Battle: This part was what needs improvement, to be honest. You wrote over 40K for Charmeleon, yet the battle was about 5K or a bit less. :\ I know you might not wanna write a 20K or so battle... But I really feel this is too short for a Charmeleon. Also, if you are going to write a short battle, remember to add a lot of description.
Thank you so much! The battle was very short, because the Charmeleon was suppossed to be exhausted from digging, and there was an erupting valcano ten feet away from them. Thank you.
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