Re: [ untitled fanfiction // preview ]
I like this, Kaze. 'Pokemon eating Pokemon' is just a bit weird to me, but that's just because... Well, I don't know, it just is. >< But, still, I think you can do well with this. It's good to see something Warrior based. ^^
Hm... Suggestions... I'm not really sure that I have any at the moment, but I'll think about it. Now, if I can just get the gumption to work on my own fanfic. -.-
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