Thread: [Pokemon] Team StormRiders [PG-13] [Chapter 38: Lucidity]
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Old 05-09-2007, 02:24 PM
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Default Re: Pokemon: Team StormRiders
Pikachu is always a nice choice for a main character. :P

It's pretty good, I caught a few mistakes but the description and creativity behind it is excellent. As for formatting, whenever someone new speaks, just start a new paragraph.

Definitely a great job though.
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