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Old 05-10-2007, 12:48 AM
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Default Re: Pokemon: Team StormRiders

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Originally Posted by Neo Pikachu View Post
Pikachu is always a nice choice for a main character. :P

It's pretty good, I caught a few mistakes but the description and creativity behind it is excellent. As for formatting, whenever someone new speaks, just start a new paragraph.

Definitely a great job though.
Thank you Neo for the review, I'll keep your advice in mind.
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