Re: Heart of Vengeance
Meg. ;_; You seriously rock so much now.
I honestly did not think this story would go over that well. ^^; I'm thinking the whole character issue is my biggest problem, as I hear that most often. I'll definitely be trying to fix that up in the next section. But thank you so much for the constructive crit. A response like: "You're story is completely perfect!" would just make me go, ":/" and think you were on something...
Haha, right well, I'll be taking all these tips to heart. Thanks a million again. ^^ Make sure you send me a message if you ever need a grading slave. ;)