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Old 10-21-2007, 06:01 AM
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Default Re: SU - Digimon Severance

Originally Posted by bekah_the_pikachu View Post
I may try this :D It looks very fun :D I just don't understand the good/dark thing. Are the seperated or in the same person? Can you explain a bit more :P
The character is split into two separate entities. They do not share a body. DreamWalker seemed to try and explain that but it seemed like he was just re-writing what was already there. RESERVED

Originally Posted by someonerandom View Post
I edited it.
There is a four-word minimum on the forum, just for your future knowledge.

The grammar has major distractions caused, by the commas that you seem, to insist on putting in places where they don't belong. I'd like for those punctuation mistakes to be fixed before you're accepted. RESERVED
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