Originally Posted by EmBreon
Yay! Thanks a bunch for the grade. Now Ben can stop bugging me about it. XP
Also, about the viewpoint changes, that was intentional because we used the boy to lead up to/introduce the show. Somewhat foreshadowing I guess. In case you wanted to know, which you probably didn't, but there it is anyway. XD
Thanks again. <3
That's what I had figured, it just seemed to me that you could have tied the two storylines together again; the little boy's story was just kind of left hanging.
And you're quite welcome!