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Old 02-11-2008, 02:49 AM
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Default Re: Embraced Miracle

Another wonderful story! But we couldn't expect any less from the fabled Harry Kim.

The premise of the story is really interesting, albeit unfortunate; humans against Pokemon. I really hope the young boy helps end this war.

I think my favorite description was:
“You have to be careful,” he croaked to the wide-eyed boy.

That really paints a perfect picture of what was going on at the time, and it really stuck out in my mind while I was reading. Fantastic choice of words! You really know how to capture the heart and attention of your audience.

Thank you so much for taking the time to share your talent with us. I'll really be looking forward to the next masterpiece you create. : ]

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