Thread: [Pokemon] The Path of Destiny (PG/PG-13)
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Old 04-10-2008, 10:47 PM
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Default Re: The Path of Destiny (PG/PG-13)

I didn't particularly like this one compared to your others, but it still was good.
I noticed some typos. For example, you messed up a few times on the female syther's gender. You put 'he' instead of 'she'.
But otherwise, really good!
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