Thread: Jack's Quest
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Old 05-27-2008, 08:57 AM
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Default Re: Jack's Quest

Wow! That was good with description.

We finally see more of Jack's past.

I still found some grammar and formatting problems, but it was much better than when you started.

Keep it up! ^_^

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