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Old 10-30-2008, 05:40 AM
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Default Re: Forsaken Bounds: The Forged Alliance [Chapter 3 is Up!]

Oh my. If someone walked up to me and said 'hi, I need three people to die to save the universe,' I don't know what I'd do...but it sure made me laugh. ^^
And how awkward was that for poor Silver? Has to be one the most embarrassing moments I've seen in a ficcy.
Found a slight typo...

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and there was an elevated platformat the end of the hatch’s walkway
You forgot to put a space between 'platform' and 'at'.

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