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Old 11-07-2008, 11:44 PM
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Default Re: Pokemon: Team StormRiders

Awesome chapter! I liked learning about Rye's past, and the Dark Pokémon...I'm sure they'll play a big role in the story later. And Rye's father is a lot worse than I thought he was...

I found one typo though:
How was I to know my fate was be sealed when I met Zanna?
was to be sealed

Stormblade: I feel really sorry for Rye now...he kind of reminds me of Thunder.

Spark: But with less craziness!

Snowcrystal: Now we know why Rye acted that way when someone said the word "friend". I really hope Zanna can get through to him.

Spark: Looking forward to the next chapter!

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