Awesome chapter! I liked learning about Rye's past, and the Dark Pokémon...I'm sure they'll play a big role in the story later. And Rye's father is a lot worse than I thought he was...
I found one typo though:
How was I to know my fate was be sealed when I met Zanna?
was to be sealed
Stormblade: I feel really sorry for Rye now...he kind of reminds me of Thunder.
Spark: But with less craziness!
Snowcrystal: Now we know why Rye acted that way when someone said the word "friend". I really hope Zanna can get through to him.
Spark: Looking forward to the next chapter!