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Old 02-15-2009, 11:32 AM
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Default Re: Through The Eyes Of A Flareon - Twoooooooo chapters up! :D *Dances*

Another good chapter! Wow, I really don't like Roarake's trainer...

Spark: He reminds me of Thunder's "master"... *shudders*

Snowcrystal: Wonder what Izante was doing following Dusty...

Well, I know we'll probably find out in the next chapter^^

I caught one mistake:
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Izante’s master probably did the same to her, seeing she looked healed now.
I think it should be "seeing that she looked healed now".

I thought it was interesting what Roarake was saying about getting taken away...I always thought it would be horrific for a pokémon to actually get stolen by a cruel trainer and never return to their old one...I have a feeling this story might show what that's like for some pokémon...

I'm also curious to how Shardclaw is going to come in, even though he won't be in the story for a little while. Well, I'm excited for the next chapter!
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