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Old 02-15-2009, 12:52 PM
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Default Re: Through The Eyes Of A Flareon - Twoooooooo chapters up! :D *Dances*

You lol at me because I ish funny. And so? Xanthe? xP

I only said it because it's true! ^^ And that was NOT a joke. =D

AND OH! TYPOS! =O

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Izante was lying about a meter away from me;
Should be 'metre' sis.

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and I had spend long enough thinking about the strange issue...
Should be 'spent' ^^

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I span around to the direction the sound was coming from at the same time
'Spun' Xanthe. =]

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I had taken a few-stepped push off the soft earth and leaped into the air!
I know what you're trying to say, but it still sounds a bit odd.

FINISHED! =D

Great description, sis! It sounds VERY good so far. But one thing I didn't like...poor Izante! Dusty almost ripped her to shreds! I wouldn't be surprised if she just cowered and fled for her life! O_O

*huggles Izante* DON'T SCARE ME LIKE THAT! >_<

But still, great job. You're an avid writer, that's for sure! =D

~Oh...didn't spot that one, Scy. xD

And way to go, sis. Just blame ME if YOU get something wrong. Tsk. *shakes head* xD
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