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Old 03-25-2009, 11:24 PM
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Default Re: The Shatterproof Files: The Thief in Sinnoh [PG/PG:13] Finished Chapter 2!

Well.
I thought it was going to be boring an unoriginal completely till you introduced the snag machine. Also, there's a typo in one of your chapters. You put lustre instead of luster when describing Twinleaf.
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