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Old 04-20-2009, 01:03 AM
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Default Re: Fan Fiction Chat/Feedback

You should probably keep it in first person, unless the flashback is a different character's. First person should always be kept in first person.
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Dali: "I know what the picture should be ... We take a duck and put some dynamite in its derriere. When the duck explodes, I jump and you take the picture."
Halsman: "Don't forget that we are in America. We will be put in prison if we start exploding ducks."
Dali: "You're right. Let's take some cats and splash them with water."
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