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Old 06-16-2009, 02:29 AM
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Default Re: Lunar Destinies (PG for violance)

This is pretty good. You have a good plot and great chapters but try to space out a little bit or readers might think it's a big wordwall and it makes it harder for them to read. You should also put up a notice. Lately, fan-fics have been getting stolen.

Other then that, this fan-fic is great! Keep up the good work!
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