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Old 08-08-2009, 06:22 PM
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Default Re: >Eternity of Time< Chapter Four Up!

You'll see the other characters eventually, Metal.

I don’t think we’ll really have to worry about the cold until we actually get to the mountains themselves, he thought to himself, so… I guess we’ll just have to keep going through these grasslands until we reach a settlement that is close to the mountains.
You accidentaly italicized the bolded part ^^'

finding herself staring a pair of red eyes
It should be, "finding herself staring at a pair of red eyes" ^^
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