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Old 10-03-2009, 02:05 PM
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Frozen Prince is approved. Nice SU, only- if I may say- try to drop the "Blane this, Blane that" (the repetition of names, basically) it gets rather annoying after a while tbh ^^ this is a friendly advice, from one who formerly was your Master.

Also, remember to add Pokemon and natures when you're ready.
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