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Old 10-09-2009, 01:10 AM
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Default Re: My Guardian Angel (PG-13) (Chapter 1 Up!)

Originally Posted by Charmander009 View Post
Hmm, the Council of Legends . . . Why does that sound familiar? o_0?

Great story so far! Like they've said, you've done wonderful descriptions and have a mastery over vocabulary. The style and flow were beautiful. Well done!
*shrugs* I tend to hear stuff then forget, so maybe I heard it somewhere or in some fan fiction I read. But thanks! Whenever I proofread, I pay the most attention to the flow because I tend to repeat words or end a sentence weirdly or something. xP I hope you stay tuned!

Oh, and Xanthe, while I was at school, I was googled apostrophe grammar rules. Two articles told me that apostrophe 's was correct, one told me that it's different styles and both are correct, and another one told me to that I don't need to add the extra 's. Well, for now, I'll keep using apostrophe 's. ^^;

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