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Old 10-11-2009, 12:46 PM
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Default Re: Purified (PG)

I've only just started reading this, so I've only read the prologue...but I thought I might comment anyway.

I'm a little confused at this point, having never played the game, but I'm sure it'll get more clear as I read more. I really liked the way you described the settings and emotions and even a little bit about the two pokemon. I hope they'll have interesting personalities as the story goes on.

I only saw one typo, here:
Through this, sent me a equivocal answer.
It should be 'an.'

Not much else to say right now as I've only barely started reading, but I'm interested to see where the story goes!

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