Re: My fan fic idea.
Well, it's an interesting premise, but your plot seems kinda flimsy at the moment. I assume you have a good reason for Jacob's sudden shift in character, and a connection to the experiment. Also, why would his settlement be the only one? Why aren't there people who oppose him? What gives him the power to become a post-apocalyptic dictator of Sinnoh? Why haven't any of the other regions sent any help? You need to answer these questions (not necessarily here, just make sure you have answers), otherwise your plot will really be unbelievable.
Dali: "I know what the picture should be ... We take a duck and put some dynamite in its derriere. When the duck explodes, I jump and you take the picture."
Halsman: "Don't forget that we are in America. We will be put in prison if we start exploding ducks."
Dali: "You're right. Let's take some cats and splash them with water."