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Old 01-16-2010, 03:04 PM
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Default Re: Faith or Coincidence

I got home from work a while ago and noticed you posted a story, I very much enjoyed your story so glad I took the time to read it, I very much like the part about Ruri's wearing black sox because I wear black sox,lol also your choice to include a school of Chinchou was way cool, IMO when you included the partabout Ruri's brother and them being on the boat, I can relate to... I am an older brother to 1 sister and I have to admit that there are times when as a brother you can expectantly or unexpectantly Pre-determine what to say to your sister. It did not come off to me telepathic more like the bond between siblings. Congrats on your capture, and Vm me when you pick a name for him/her.
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