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Old 07-27-2010, 09:52 PM
-Amorphous Offline
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Default Re: General Spriter's Showcase

@Speed-X- Looking back at previous posts, the Spriting forum here is pretty noobish in a way, actually. Not to be offensive, but.

In fact, i dug up your Deviantart account. JirachiTheChao, right? I lol'd a bit at your rant on PE2K.

I'm not a very good scratch spriter myself, actually. D: It takes me forever to do scratchwork, period, and forget about GOOD scratchwork.

Might post a fusion soon.

Anyways, I... have NO IDEA how to critique your "blobs", Speed. xD They look great, but they're SO TINY that I can't imagine finding error in them. To me, with stuff like that, you've either made something pretty terrible looking or perfect looking.


However, if the whole series of blobs are meant to be "Evolutions", then there's a small gripe I have. With evolutions, the evolved form should NEVER be a bigger version of the first form.


Well, looking at the first and second forms, they're too similar. It's like-

"Oh, a blob. Oh, a slightly larger blob."

One more thing. The first form almost looks like a rock to me since the eyes and mouth are so small. I know that the blob is small in the first place, but really.

Sorry, I wish that I could say more. Firstly, it's sprited very well, secondly, it's tiny.

Well, all I can say is- reasons aside, please color it. It looks so boring and weird without color. All in all though, it's nice.
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